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undine_vampira

Don't Hide Me from The World

May 03, 2007 14:20

So now back to the Dong Bang Shin Ki house... After Chang Min found Yoosu getting it on in the lift... Where Yoosu and Chang Min found Jae Joong on the couch... and someone knocks on Yunho's bedroom door...

Title : Don’t Hide Me from the World
Length : Chaptered
Author : MEeeeEE!!! undine_vampira.
Rating : NC-17 as it ( Read more... )

don't hide me from the world (dhmw)

Comments 23

matsujuns_gurl May 3 2007, 12:58:34 UTC

OHHHHHHHHH!!!!! can't wait^^ sound so exiting <3<3<3

undine_vampira May 3 2007, 14:52:06 UTC

hahah! wow! u r fast! *laughs*

matsujuns_gurl May 3 2007, 16:00:05 UTC

Accidentally ^O^ i am going to read it now^^

matsujuns_gurl May 3 2007, 16:21:25 UTC

Sorry for spaming *cries and hits you shoulder playfully hard* why is it so sad and yet has happyness...
the last pharagraph showes changmins true personallity (ignore the grammar mistakes please) he has a protective and nurtoring (again ignore) calmness about him that is absolutly beautiful, so thank you for bringing it out..
Oh, can't wait for the next update, my exams are arond the corner as well, good luck..
I want to add you as a friend if you don't mind? and again I . L.O.V.V . Y.O.U <3<3<3

Thread 5

redmist_23 May 3 2007, 15:37:24 UTC

how aptly named the chapter. Maelstorm of madness. to lose yourself is easy to survive is another thing.

i liked the way you developed your characters. Good job.

undine_vampira May 3 2007, 15:49:58 UTC

Thanks!

Agree with with you, to lose yourself is easy to survive is another thing! that's a good way of putting it... ^__^

The maelstorm symbolises, the depth and the chaos he plunge into.. madness.. pure madness..

Thank you so much for reading!

eleclya111 May 3 2007, 15:56:05 UTC

Third again -_-

eleclya111 May 3 2007, 16:06:47 UTC

Uggghhh, I hate all this misundertanding between Yunho and Jae *pokes them hard*

But I love your fic! <3

My pick of the chapter is this sentence: The taste of the vinegar still pungent on his sensitive tongue, the remnants of the acidity of the bashing words spat at them and the malicious stare pricking upon his skin still inundating his senses.

It's very nice, I can almost feel like Changmin. I love how you mixed his impressions with taste and I can relate with his memory of the stare :)

undine_vampira May 4 2007, 01:38:09 UTC

*poke them with you* heh... it'll resolve... don't worry... things are going to get interesting in the next chappie... XDD

and i love you! <3

Quotes! *grins*
Ah~~ you pick one of my two favourites too... ^___^ Glad you like that...

Thank you so much for reading! Saranghaeyo!

eleclya111 May 4 2007, 02:34:43 UTC

Oh GREAT interesting is GEEEEAT :D

So, Cassender, he will come bac right? Because he realy grew on me wth his sweet flirty personality and his strange name.

Thread 6

untinnu May 3 2007, 19:57:47 UTC

ahhh..so sad..

just for everyone..since they're all crying..

oh..YunJae..how will things turn out for them, I wanna see what happens the next morning..akwardness much?..

undine_vampira May 4 2007, 01:41:11 UTC

*pats you* there there... it's okay...it will get better...

^___^

Yes, can bet there will be much awkwardness... ;P but hey, it'll get interesting... hahah! XDDD not telling any further...* sticks tongue out at you* hahha!

Thank you so much for reading!

Woooo...... eirii_chan May 3 2007, 20:32:55 UTC

Well... my feelings for you right now are a little bit mixed up ( ... )

Re: Woooo...... undine_vampira May 4 2007, 01:57:42 UTC

*cowers* don't hate me! hhahhah!

owh wow... that is wow... Life? life? wow... i have no idea my writting has such an impact... Sorry if this chapter messed up with your emotion... *pats you* I'm so happy that you can picture what i write because as a writer, to get your reader to be able to picture what you write and feel it is the biggest accolade... and readers like you are the writers life and drive to keep on writting and improving... Seriously... *give you a big hug*

It was just last week that you said poor Yunho, ne? hahahha! now you want to punch the living daylight out of him... *laughs* sorry had to make him a bastard for a while and hurt jae.. Things will get better! next chapter will take a different turn and atmosphere... ^_^
Don't worry jaeho is strong enough to come together eventually...

hahha! yes, yes, i remember happy ending... ^__^
Ah~~~ that is so interesting... a fiction that gave birth to your love... nice... *twirls* reminds me of Jaeho somehow... wah.... hahah! I'll check up on that!

Thank you for reading!