one-shot: everything's going to be okay

Nov 15, 2010 17:23

Everything's going to be okay
implied 2Min | PG-13 | 826 words
Is there such thing as to die a blissful death? To have your pain, worries, and doubts taken away before you take your last breath?
Stupid summary is stupid as usual. Anyways, this is for this month's challenge at shawol_haven . I haven't written in ages, so pardon my fail. Also, I would like to ( Read more... )

g: au, l: oneshot, p: minho/taemin

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x_lain_x November 16 2010, 00:38:07 UTC
I love it <3

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undistanced November 16 2010, 05:52:25 UTC
I'm glad you did! :D Oh, and thanks for reading~ /showers in hearts

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blindteddy November 16 2010, 00:56:12 UTC
my spot! will edit after i eat! :> ♥

oh my god. this was beautiful! REALLY beautiful! i don't even know what should i say i─ i just pictured all the scenes in my head and it was precious and taemin, taemin. such a cute little angel! minho is really lucky to have him. and i wouldn't mind if you write a longer version of this, because this was perfect. and i really want to know what happened before.

oh god, oh god! i'm so glad you posted this! because i really needed this: a good 2min to make my night way better. thank you so much!
the ending was REALLY good! i don't even know what more can i say about this. awesome! ♥
/GIVES COOKIES YOU DESERVE THEM GURL! :DDDD

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undistanced November 16 2010, 05:58:53 UTC
;____; wtf, i don't deserve such a good comment /sniffles

slcmsldfj thank you so much <3 I'm glad you like it, really! /showers in love
i'll be sure to start writing on the longer version hehe, you motivate me so :D
AND YAY COOKIES NOMNOMNOM ♥

GAH, just thank you so much, this comment made my day so much better. I've been in a delirious coughing rampage, so I'm glad this fic didn't turn out like crap. :'D

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a_life_defiant November 16 2010, 02:10:30 UTC
*gives you entire cookie jar* ;D

Wow. The way you write....so descriptive....it brings the scene into focus sharply, but in the best of ways. not like..I dunno 'there were two houses. Both had stripes. The first was diagonal, the second was horizontal - and they...." blah blah blah. Not sure if I explained my point properly here. LOL FAIL. XD

I like how you say shit. and....I'll shut up now.

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undistanced November 16 2010, 06:00:41 UTC
WEWT, COOKIES ♥

And don't worry, I totally get what you mean. I always like to spice things up a bit - I mean, a simple narrative isn't pleasing to my eye, so~ :x

Anyways, thanks so much for reading! Appreciate it~ :'D

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wykedpanda November 16 2010, 02:29:16 UTC
;_________; Wonderful~~~ <3 I want angel!SHINee... *points to icon*

/runs off to kill gang members

Thank you for sharing~~~

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undistanced November 16 2010, 06:02:20 UTC
They are totally angels in disguise, which is why I totally fell for their Ring Ding Dong concept. I totally didn't care if those were the most fakest wings ever, angel!SHINee makes me one happy little girl :'DDD

No, no, thank you for reading m'dear! Totally appreciate it~ ♥♥♥

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lovelybubbles04 November 16 2010, 02:33:36 UTC
damn.
this is definitely going into my favorites.
I love the way you wrote this!
I could almost feel everything minho felt<3

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undistanced November 16 2010, 06:03:44 UTC
:D I'm honored! I'm glad you like it so much, I tried my best, hehe >w<;

Thanks so much for reading bb! Appreciate it~ <3

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