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undrscoredom2nd

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Jan 28, 2011 21:51

Any other error made is my fault. Feel free to point out :)

bbc!sherlock, sherlock100, slash fanfiction

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shouldboverthis January 28 2011, 04:28:35 UTC

This was really lovely. I love when they're tender together and you've captured the relationship perfectly.

undrscoredom2nd January 28 2011, 09:31:59 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it!

knotted_rose January 28 2011, 04:41:15 UTC

I really liked this. Thanks for sharing!

undrscoredom2nd January 28 2011, 13:42:38 UTC

Thank you! You're very much welcome for reading :)

days_of_storm January 28 2011, 07:46:44 UTC

ohh, so very sweet :)

undrscoredom2nd January 28 2011, 14:01:16 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you think so!

stardust_made January 28 2011, 08:17:41 UTC

Such an original way to fill the prompt. I really love this, really!

undrscoredom2nd January 28 2011, 14:16:17 UTC

Thank you~

cinderbella333 January 28 2011, 09:56:40 UTC

Wow, you did a fantastic job finding a whole host of body language cues to mention. I imagine that must have been difficult. Especially since I believed each and every one of them, but they weren't obvious. That was extremely well-done. I love the fact that you pointed out in the story that Sherlock taught John to appreciate detail, the tiny, overlooked piece of information communicating a hidden message of truth. That really made this study of tiny detail seem like an even more in-depth study of what they mean to each other than longer, more overt pieces I've read. What I'm saying is that these lines here: "If there's one thing that John had learned from Sherlock, it was that he loves the smallest details. He doesn't need grand; a minute act can express everything." Yeah, that'd my head-canon now. And the final scene where John is watching (one of my FAVORITE) a Doctor Who ep and this little interaction takes place. Oh, that was really excellent. You were actually able to write a story that never said it out loud but still said some ( ... )

undrscoredom2nd January 28 2011, 14:23:51 UTC

I imagine that must have been difficult. Oh lawd, the truth in these words. My beta was so amused at me because I had to rewrite this roughly 8 times (yes, I kept track :'D) before I found something I thought worthy. Good to know the constant rewriting paid off!

Also, OMG, THAT TOO IS TOTALLY ONE OF MY FAVORITE EPISODES. It's the first Doctor Who episode I saw, actually, & it was enough to reel me! \O/

Thank you for your lovely words. :)