Amrita

[undying_desire]

Title: Amrita
Author: undying_desire
Pairing: GTOP Seunghyun/Jiyong
Rating: PG-13
Genre: one-shot, tragedy
Summary: "I pulled the trigger on the gun I had aimed at my heart."
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Comments

[narusasu136]

wow...just WOW. I really don't know what else to say. I read this yesterday at 1AM right before going to sleep and I spent another half an hour in my bed just thinking about this fic. Is immortality really that important? What would I do if I had a chance to live forever? Was Seunghyun doing a right thing bringing Jiyong back? thoughts like this kept going through my head. I really loved this story! Though I'm not sure about the end. I loved the way it ended, it was interesting and with a twist but actually I think Tabi has being rather selfish by bringing Ji back to life. The boy would probably just suffer again and at the end would do the same thing - kill himself. Dammit girl, you just blew my mind, I don't know what to think! Seriously, keep it going, I'm really looking forward to your future fics :)

[undying_desire]

Haha, aw, I'm sorry to have had this keep you up. xD But I really do love when my stories make people think. I also agree with you about the end, Seunghyun is just going to keep Jiyong in a cycle of being haunted by death and killing himself. I don't think Seunghyun understands Jiyong's feelings, he only knows that Jiyong makes him feel something and he wants that. I suppose love can make us greedy and a bit selfish.

Thank you very much for your feedback. My next fic series will delve a bit more into the idea of immortality. Hopefully I can get you thinking more. ^.^

[memai69]

this is really good, im thrilled. i love at the ending where seunghyun pulled out a pistol and said 'he's not yours to sell'. thank you for writting! *cookies*

[undying_desire]

Yay, I'm glad you liked it! Mmm, and I'll gladly take some cookies for a present. *Noms*