Seunghyun being a bad boy and breaking hearts. I should scold him for that. Haha. We'll find out about TOP's past and secret present life soon enough. ^.^ Thanks for reading.
This was very delicate and bittersweet. There is real emotion in these words and it comes out smoothly.
What I appreciate the most about this is the reality of the situation. I like the fact that though Seunghyun wants to hold on, despite his better judgement, he is still think of what he is and who he is. An "actor" for all his clients. But I'm also pleased to see there is a softness that is rapidly forming around him, Jiyong being the cause.
As for Ji, his reactions are so normal that it was heartbreaking, and I appreciated that. I felt for him and the struggle he had was very real. Of course, I always enjoy when I see that lyrics or music are also involved the storyline.
Oh I'm so glad you can feel their emotions. It makes reading much more enjoyable when you can understand the characters. ^^
I feel bad for giving them a slice-of-life instead of a nice fluffy romance sometimes. You're right though, reality is sometimes what helps build a story.
Gah, and I feel even worse for being cruel to Jiyong. Now, you must tell me what these lyrics are because I don't know what I used. xD
::smiles:: Well, Jiyong wrote the lyrics as noted in the last paragraph, so what does his heart say they are? (Though I do have a beautiful song/lyrics that seem to fit the mood going through my head like when I wrote the lyrics for "Can You Save Me?")
Oh, silly me thought you meant I quoted lyrics from a song. xD I have a running list of tracks there were inspirational for this story and it wouldn't be odd if a line from one slipped into the text. Haha. I'm not as skilled at writing lyrics though, so I'm not sure I'll go above and beyond like you. ~.^
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We'll find out about TOP's past and secret present life soon enough. ^.^ Thanks for reading.
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Ihope Seunghyun doesn'y continue to push him away...
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What I appreciate the most about this is the reality of the situation. I like the fact that though Seunghyun wants to hold on, despite his better judgement, he is still think of what he is and who he is. An "actor" for all his clients. But I'm also pleased to see there is a softness that is rapidly forming around him, Jiyong being the cause.
As for Ji, his reactions are so normal that it was heartbreaking, and I appreciated that. I felt for him and the struggle he had was very real. Of course, I always enjoy when I see that lyrics or music are also involved the storyline.
Great job, looking forward to the next chapter!
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I feel bad for giving them a slice-of-life instead of a nice fluffy romance sometimes. You're right though, reality is sometimes what helps build a story.
Gah, and I feel even worse for being cruel to Jiyong. Now, you must tell me what these lyrics are because I don't know what I used. xD
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