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undying_desire

Paying Extra [4/13]

Jul 31, 2011 11:34

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series: paying extra, pairing: gtop, fandom: big bang, fanfic

Comments 38

irm_cik July 31 2011, 19:48:57 UTC

ooooh~~~ oh god!!!
this is such a good story!
lying to yourself is harder and more painful than lying to someone else....don't lie to urself hyunnie...isn't fighting together better?
plz update soon ^^

undying_desire July 31 2011, 23:30:16 UTC

They should always fight together, it's so much better that way. Thanks for reading this chapter and I'll try to update soon. ^^

jin2jin July 31 2011, 20:39:18 UTC

aish i can feel jiyongs pain D: but way to go with that ending, seunghyun is in for a treat there..

beautifully written, even if it felt like a filler chapter to you it still fit perfectly. scary men with guns huh D: i hope you don't plan on killing off any of bigbang =[

undying_desire July 31 2011, 23:31:42 UTC

Our Kwon Leader isn't going to go down without a fight now is he? ~.^

There will be blood in later chapters...hopefully none of Big Bang suffers. Should I give a warning if there is a character death? =O

jin2jin August 1 2011, 00:27:38 UTC

ji-leader won't ever go down without a fight!

if the character dieing is important then yeah D: a warning would be nice..then at the same time i would still read the chapter either way haha.

undying_desire August 1 2011, 00:32:09 UTC

I'm the type of person to enjoy keeping things secret. *lol* Hopefully, none of Big Bang will end up dead.

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undying_desire July 31 2011, 23:37:22 UTC

Oh wow, I'm stunned. Your comment is making me blush. *Covers face*

I'm extremely happy that you think I did a good job with the plot and characterizations. Doing justice to Seunghyun and Jiyong means a lot. ^^

Thank you so much for the lovely comment. *Hugs*

spot! dyealer July 31 2011, 21:28:28 UTC

ahhh....both are soo good at acting, concealing emotions but deep down both have insecurities..

what will happen next?!! I wanna knoww...what is JiYong planning to do??? sooo many questions...

I'll be waiting for the updateeee...!! =DDD

Re: spot! undying_desire July 31 2011, 23:39:28 UTC

Let's hope they don't keep up the act forever right?

All answers will be revealed in time, I'll try and make sure of that. Next update will shock you with Jiyong's plot. He may have just lost his mind. . .

kutunakal July 31 2011, 21:39:07 UTC

Huaaaaaaa, so saaaad.. I hope this doesn't last long, the act of rejecting. Can I just not open the community for one month and found out that you had finished this story and then I can read it from chapter7-end? *haha, like hell I can, I kept opening this community every hour to check for any updates

Please please please please update.. I want to see what happen next.^^

undying_desire July 31 2011, 23:42:44 UTC

Seunghyun is probably going to be forced into the charade...oops...that may be giving too much away. Oh gosh, if you go away for a month then I won't be able to enjoy more lovely comments on each update. ^^ The next chapter will be out Tuesday so you don't have to check every hour until then. Hehe.