Paying Extra [8/13]

[undying_desire]

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[kutunakal]

SPOT SPOT SPOT! ^_____^

[kutunakal]

Oh nooooooooo.. How could you do this to me....? You granted my wish, explaining Seunghyun's history, but then.. but then Jiyong.. Oh Seunghyun if you don't get your ass fast enough to save Ji, I will!!!!*off to change clothes

This chapter is a tease.. Argh!! Please update.. >.<

By the way, I'm glad that YB accepted them, finally. And Seungri, I find him so adorable here. I wish I had a younger brother like him, haha
And Jaejoong.. It's funny he wanted to kill Seunghyun here while they were bff in the real world,, hha

Update, update, update? ^^

[undying_desire]

Hold off on your heroics! Seunghyun is on his way to save his distressed lad.

I figured Jaejoong fits in pretty well as a killer. From friends to enemies! Oh my.

I enjoying being a tease a bit too much. Haha. I'll try and update soon, but I've got a lot of stuff to do this week. *Bows*

[laura_lovegd]

Good chapter, thanx for updating

[undying_desire]

Thanks for reading too, hun. ^.^

[arsinen]

Damn this is getting good. OH OH so Hyunnie's an agent. XD And only acted like a prostitute ah...

I can't wait for more sweetheart. It's dire I need to find out how Hyunnie's going to save Jiyong.

*sits impatiently for the next update*

[undying_desire]

Seunghyun made a mighty good prostitute if I do say so myself. Good at acting like always. ~.^

I promise the heroics will come soon. *Bows* Thank you for reading, darling.

[miracleshining]

Excellent use of characterization here and you really set the mood for the progress of the storyline!

I have a soft spot for Seungie being a hitman/special agent/assassin, I think it really fits him! And once again, Jae-Jae makes my heart flutter.

Great job, looking forward to the next update!

[undying_desire]

I'm glad you like the shift in the story. It's time for more action and sex! xD

You're completely right about Seunghyun fitting into the hitman type of occupation. His sharp features just make me think killer. (Maybe that's a bad thing? Haha.)

Thanks for reading, darling.

[jin2jin]

ohhh so good :o jae doesn't know about ji and seunghyun huh...

i hope seunghyun comes to safe ji fast..but probably won't huh XD or it wouldn't be so exiting haha

[jin2jin]

and im so glad bae came around! he's just too much of a nice person to leave ji alone huh x3

[undying_desire]

Let's be glad he doesn't know. Imagine the things he'd do to piss Seunghyun off. . . o.0

Seunghyun will definitely be off to save Jiyong eventually. ~.^ Hehe, and see? I told you Youngbae wasn't much to worry about.

Thanks for reading as always, dear. *Bows*