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peacensafety August 11 2011, 14:22:52 UTC
I liked the image of Seunghyun in his underwear... nicely done!

Good job!

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undying_desire August 11 2011, 14:36:06 UTC
I like him out of his underwear. ~.^ Haha. I'm happy you liked the chapter, darling. ^.^

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maki_of_japan August 11 2011, 14:39:15 UTC
KEYBOARD SMASHHHHGBEDGTUBDEBLHBBGHBSDBLDHBGSDHBGS

THAT. WAS THE MOST LOVING SEX EVAR. Brought a tear to my eye...xD but really it did :DDD

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undying_desire August 11 2011, 15:43:34 UTC
I really tried to show that they're completely and totally in love now. So happy you could feel that too. Thanks so much, dear.

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irm_cik August 11 2011, 14:55:57 UTC
Oh beautiful indeed....u r amazing my dear....this ch made me so happy that i'm sure i'll be smiling like a fool for the rest of the day

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undying_desire August 11 2011, 15:47:45 UTC
Awe, it's so nice to know I could make you happy with this chapter. I wish I could keep it that way through the whole fic. *lol*

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lethallycute August 11 2011, 16:15:36 UTC
*drum roll* *spot light shines* LADIES AND GENTLEMEN WELCOME TO THE MAIN EVENT!!!! THIS IS WHAT YOU'VE ALL BEEN WAITING FOR!
I can honestly say that I am in love with this! Its was so..... *starting to tear up* BEAUTIFUL! Seunghyun naked!! WOOO!!! Ji wanting more! Took them long enough to release that *cough* pint up sexual frustration. Looks like Seunghyun can rescue Ji in more ways than one! Am I right??? *wiggles eyebrows*

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undying_desire August 11 2011, 16:45:13 UTC
Wah~ your comment is so stunning. ^.^ So true that it took them forever to finally just get together. Seunghyun is definitely a big hero here.

Now I'm debating if I want to do the next part the way I have planned or make it happier. xD

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lethallycute August 11 2011, 19:18:12 UTC
Hmm....thats something to really think about. Especially considering that they just found some happiness....you could make it happier then drop the "Uh-Oh" bomb in the middle lol

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bokuwashinigami August 11 2011, 16:33:56 UTC
HEY! :)

I just discovered this story and your journal through the g_top community today, and boy! I HAVE BEEN MISSING OUT ON SO MANY AMAZING STORIES! (Where have I been all this time??!!)

I read this series from the start to this latest chapter all in one go just now, and I really have no words to describe how absolutely phenomenal I think your writing is! Not only is the plot very well-developed and extremely engaging, but your writing is also so well-executed and beautiful. I can't get enough of this story (and all your other stories!), that's for sure. <3

This piece is so dramatic and dynamic, and the imagery is so vivid that I can just see everything play out in my head. You're such a great writer, and I don't know how to praise you enough. :D

The smut in this chapter was very delicious and extremely pretty; if you hadn't mentioned it I wouldn't have known it was your first time writing it! Gosh, keep up the amazing work -- you just gained a new fan here!

A million hearts to you and your writing. :D

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undying_desire August 11 2011, 16:58:08 UTC
Oh my, you're flattering me too much. *Blushes* I'm very happy you came across my fic. ^.^ It makes me happy to hear from new readers.

I can't believe you read it all in one go, though. Haha. It's extremely nice to know that you found it so enthralling. That is praise enough in itself. ^^

Thank you, for your stellar comment, Grace. *Bows* I hope to hear from you again.

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