The Obnoxious Prince (Jiyong/Seunghyun AU, PG)

[unembraced_fic]

Title: The Obnoxious Prince
Characters: Jiyong/Seunghyun, Big Bang and Se7en.
Rating: PG for swearing. Mostly G.
Notes:
It's AU, based on mainly this pic, but everyone already knows how ridiculously princely Seunghyun is anyway (I'd post more links to pics here, but it might break some fandom do-not-take/repost rules, so just look them up on

Comments

[la_geni]

BTW I would love you if you made a second part tbh.

[crazy4moony]

aish, and it's so awful because my review was like... page-length and now I'm even stalking other people's reviews, but yes.

Just yes, "once I had a brain tumor and hallucinated about painting!you following me". Yes.

[unembraced_fic]

OH woeihroewhtweothew SEQUEL! I NEED TO THINK ABOUT IT. Because I honestly wasn't planning a sequel but a lot of people seem to want one!! So I will probably write a short follow-up piece on it, or something.

"once I had a brain tumor and hallucinated about painting!you following me"

Imagine Seunghyun's reaction. Just.

[summanaro]

ah it seems your formatting kinda got wonky in the middle. idk why. but yeah, anyway I kept reading and I know most people would get to the wonky formatting and hit the back button. but I didn't because your story engaged me. it's well written and cute and the characterization is good even though this an alternate universe! I really like the idea of painting!tabi just, coming to life and acting like the most adorable nuisance. it's too sad that it was all because jiyong ended up to be sick. I was afraid that the fic would end on an unhappy note with jiyong just forever absent mind-ly staring at the painting. but there's a real life tabi come to save the day(fic)! ahh I really want a sequel now where jiyong is all "you know I once had a brain tumor and hallucinated about painting!you following me" lmao

this is rambly, but yeah the short version is I loved it.

[unembraced_fic]

Do you mind pin-pointing where the formatting got weird? Is it the dialogue having line breaks in some bits and not having line breaks in other bits?

ahh I really want a sequel now where jiyong is all "you know I once had a brain tumor and hallucinated about painting!you following me" lmao

aowhtoewhtwewoihte *picks up pen* haha I've started some ideas for a sequel but we'll see if it amounts to anything!

Anyhoot, thank you for reading! :)

[crazy4moony]

I really adore this concept of Seunghyun as the little prince... I've actually read like... three-odd stories with that concept before and all this time I was thinking "I need to do this. I need to do something with this

[memai69]

aish! i love your comment, period.

[crazy4moony]

Oh :)
Thank you so much for saying that :)

I saw the author hadn't replied to any of the comments, lol, so I didn't even expect anyone to read it... but thank you :)

[unembraced_fic]

Sorry!! Taking my time, I know, I used up my bandwidth at home for the month...(backward country with backward lame capped expensive internet connections, I know)

[thenimbletree]

This was amazing! I can't believe you thought up the "T.he O.bnoxious P.rince" thing- it so fits his Alive concept :D The story tugged at my heart- I won't be able to forget Ji's imaginary prince for a long time. Thank you for posting!

[unembraced_fic]

That was really hard to think up, actually!! So thank you!! :)

[jiyonglikesme]

that's it! I'm crying while typing this. This is just just beautiful! It caters all the emotions. You did amazing job! wish i could say better words but thank you

[unembraced_fic]

Ahhhh *wipes away your tears* Thank you so much!! Overwhelmed really