Forgive me, for I have sinned [fanfiction]

[unending_heaven]

Title: Forgive me, for I have sinned.
Chapter: One-shot
Author: unending_heaven (Rina)
Genre: Drama, slight angst, drabble/one-shot
Warnings: Very mild drug reference
Rating: PG or PG-13 depending on how you feel about drugs.
Pairings/Characters: ToraxShou
Summary: There was a helplessness in his eyes that made Shou just want to slap him. He wasn’

Comments

[anselik]

This is really good. Really well-written. I think you captured their emotions really well. I will definitely watch out for your other works!

[unending_heaven]

Thank you so much!! (^_^)/ that means a lot <3

[sazeixrinshou]

it's sad, and beautiful at the same time.
poor tora and shou >..

[unending_heaven]

thank you <3 I know, I feel so bad for them. I always put them in bad situations Dx

[eimininja]

Oh this isreally good, its sad i feel so sorry for them :(

[unending_heaven]

Thank you :) I'm glad you liked it!

[himenojigoku]

I like this very much :) Never seen Tora as a drug dealer. (I'm guessing that's right) I'll like to see more<3

[unending_heaven]

Thank you! and yes, that's right ^^ Hopefully I will post some more soon :DD

[ayanowuv]

Rina?
Rina?
Rina?
SKUGHRGIU
IT'S JET OMG DKJGHFDLG <3
This was really good!! ^_^
Arrghh the emotion and the guilt djkghdlgkg /creys
Sorry I'm no good at critiquing cuz I tend to splutter and ramble LOL, but I like to let authors know how their stories went! ^_^
Well done! :)

[unending_heaven]

OMG HI ALDSGSDKLFG *tacklehug*
Thank you <33 I'm so glad you liked it 8'DD oh you're fine hun don't worry about it <3333

[ayanowuv]

/splutters dkghdrliguhdgli
*ULTRA TACKLE HUG*
hehehehe
^__^
and no worries, I look forward to more from you ;) ♥