fic | shelter.

May 26, 2012 20:42

shelter. | harry/louis & eleanor/louis - slight. | r. | 3, 500. | And Louis tips Harry’s head back with a skillful thumb and kisses him softly, thinking: 'this is us against the world.' | warning: management, implications of a staged relationship. | Been having a rut for a month, this decides to come out. Hope you enjoy and sorry for any mistakes. ( Read more... )

harry styles/louis tomlinson, fic, one direction

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pendules May 27 2012, 06:07:09 UTC
i love how you describe their relationship, how they're almost in their own little world, even with external forces to contend with, and it doesn't really matter as long as they're together. i kind of see it actually being like that. great fic. ♥

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colazitron May 27 2012, 11:36:09 UTC
Oh, this hurts. But it's also really good, because they're not breaking. They're fighting and they're soul mates and it's very beautiful in its simplicity.

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expletory May 27 2012, 13:45:55 UTC
I loved reading this. cataloguing is a fascinating phenomenon. also, this pattern of dynamics between Louis and Harry is intriguing. I like how you write, it's very cinematic somehow, like the words easily translate into something you can picture when you read.

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rock_my_town May 27 2012, 14:34:04 UTC
this was such a lovely look into what their relationship could be like. i love the quiet feeling that weaves throughout the story, but then there's that very real sense of importance in everything they have together. i love fics like this, where it's more moments that make up the whole of who they are, always so satisfying to read. Also, shout out to the walk the moon quote at the start, never listening to that song the same way again!

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inure May 27 2012, 22:18:24 UTC
oh wow, that hurt so much but in the best possible way. this was absolutely beautiful and ugh i loved it. <3

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