Happy fandom swap, destinylight!
Happy fandom swap, destinylight!
Title: Mute
Author: rainyd
Fandom: Naruto
Summary: "Naruto carries him back home. They barely stir the dust that's all
that remains of Orochimaru's lair. Dust, a fallen pillar, and a few bodies
waiting for the clean up squad."
Pairings: Naruto/Sasuke
Rating: PG
Warnings: Swearing
( Mute )
Title: Mute
Author: rainyd
Fandom: Naruto
Summary: "Naruto carries him back home. They barely stir the dust that's all
that remains of Orochimaru's lair. Dust, a fallen pillar, and a few bodies
waiting for the clean up squad."
Pairings: Naruto/Sasuke
Rating: PG
Warnings: Swearing
( Mute )
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I honestly have no words besides several faint "O" noises. That was beautiful. That was beautiful and amazing and everything I've ever dreamed of and everything I hope canon can be like and Oh.
I am so bad with this review because this fic is so very very very good, especially the language and the writing style. It's just so elegant and painful-but-in-a-good-way, like the line His hair is splayed out on the pillow like a dead hand.
I love how you keep the situation vague; its so delicate, like Sasuke himself. The reader (or at least I did anyway) really connects with Naruto in this fic, because we're every bit as lost as he is.
Oh and Sakura, I love how you didn't ignore her, and I love the line like her old smile. Sakura, despite 3 years of development in strength and character, will revert back to her old undying adoration of Sasuke at the drop of a hat because he is Sasuke and it hurts. The imagery you create in that scene is beautiful as well, Sakura, bright and pink, and Naruto in subdued shades of orange ( ... )
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