Comments | unexpectedtimes: Fic, Fujicest, The Five Stages Of Love

unexpectedtimes

Fic, Fujicest, The Five Stages Of Love

Mar 10, 2006 01:46

I entered stagesoflove this year with Fujicest - these are the five drabbles I wrote, for the themes attraction, romance, passion, intimacy and commitment. I tried a new style, and tried to improve on my drabbling technique in these. I wonder if it worked? I'm so used to rambling on in my narrative...!

( The Five Stages Of Love )

Comments 6

pixxers March 10 2006, 01:57:13 UTC

God, I missed these and I don't know how. I was looking carefully for them, but I thought(hoped) you might cross-post in your lj. These are all so perfectly beautiful, Helen. I always really, really enjoy every single thing you write and this is a great example of why.

That last one broke me - excellent work.

kat8cha March 10 2006, 01:59:15 UTC

Oh. Oh. I'd read the first 2, but the last three killed me. Oh, poor Yuuta and Shuusuke. ~Pets the pretty Fuji boys~ It's so sad for them.

alojla March 10 2006, 09:38:42 UTC

So beautiful and sad. I love the way you express so much feelings in so few words.

tayles March 10 2006, 10:11:39 UTC

*pounces on you* Love! Goddammit, how do you do that? Few words, hints, it's all so SUBTLE yet imbued with so much emotion!

*cuddles Shuusuke and Yuuta*

pixiesmith March 11 2006, 23:58:08 UTC

So sad. So incredibly sad.