FIC: if i asked you to dance

May 15, 2011 20:11

Title: if i asked you to dance ( Read more... )

usuk, arthur/england, hetalia, fanfiction, alfred/america

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shibbyone May 16 2011, 02:10:43 UTC
That... that just broke my heart. It was so sad and I actually started tearing up while reading and I never tear at fics. The amount of emotion and confusion Alfred shows while singing, just expresses how he probably felt at 9/11-- and how everyone felt in those first few years. This was just lovely. ♥

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unfinishe May 16 2011, 09:18:49 UTC
Oh my goodness! Thank you very much :3

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ren_chan146 May 16 2011, 11:53:38 UTC
I'm speechless. This was so wonderful. Thank you so much for this.

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unfinishe May 16 2011, 19:54:43 UTC
Um, you're welcome :)

Thank you for reviewing! <3

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addicttoanime May 16 2011, 07:17:52 UTC
aww,so sweet...I so speechless right now I can't write what I want to write down but here it goes.

this is so sweet and heart-warming.Really gives of the feelings of both Alfred and Arthur (and not to mention the lyrics).
when I started reading this I immediately play that song in my player and started crying.

and the part where Alfred begins to cry and Arthur continues to sing the lyrics and change them to convey his love and telling Alfred that he can be his hero is so sweet and heart warming...urgh...it's just to sweet (I don't ,mind having mental diabetes If I can read more sweet fanfics like this)

I JUST LOVE THIS.

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unfinishe May 16 2011, 19:53:43 UTC
Oh my goodness, I didn't even think it was that sad! :O

Thank you so much for your amazing review!

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kasumicc May 16 2011, 21:07:14 UTC
;w; Such a lovely setting, and it had a nice pace as well. There are so many raw emotions in there ♥
Good job!

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unfinishe May 17 2011, 01:20:54 UTC
Teehee, thank you very much. :)

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