(the dust of ages) chapter two: this side of the blue

[unfinishedline]

Title: The Dust of Ages
Author: missaliceblue
Pairing: Peter/Claire. Written for eowyn_girl.
Rating: R for themes, language, some adult situations. But mostly themes.
Status: 2/15. I’ve written the whole thing already, and will try to update daily.
Summary: Peter and Claire were both caught up in this crazy, never-ending circle a long time ago. The real question

Comments

[runawaycherie]

A great second chapter that continues to leave me wanting more.

[sinverguenza]

lightning quick! i like it ;) thank you!

[anonymous]

Hmmm... So Peter's not the father?... I thought for sure he would be... I'm wondering if it means anything that you mentioned a few times that Claire doesn't really look pregnant... Very interesting! You sure do know how to keep your readers hooked *lol*

Peter is very solicitous and caring toward Claire, just as he should be, while also being a little territorial and jealous :) I like how you've written him, Claire, et al. so far :)

Looking forward to tomorrow's chap :)

Joanna

[sinverguenza]

haha, oh. i'd love to comment but i dont want to ruin anything.

so i''ll just say that i am pleased you're enjoying it :) thanks for reviewing!

[dragonydreams]

So, it's not Peter's baby? I'm all confused. I know you'll straighten it out, eventually.

[sinverguenza]

hopefully its no too confusing to the point of not being enjoyable, lol. and i will, i promise ;)

[sinverguenza]

yep like i said, i think im going to post a new chap a day. depending on whether or not i can get to a comp. i hate waiting ;)

[ladycat713]

Interesting way to bring them together. Great update.

[sinverguenza]

thanks! glad you liked.