(the dust of ages) chapter eleven: bones

[unfinishedline]

Title: The Dust of Ages
Author: missaliceblue
Pairing: Peter/Claire. Written for eowyn_girl.
Rating: R for themes, language, some adult situations. But mostly themes.
Status: 11/15. I’ve written the whole thing already, and will try to update daily.
Summary: Peter and Claire were both caught up in this crazy, never-ending circle a long time ago. The real question

Comments

[tju_tju_tju_tju]

*squee* That was great. I loved the end...how Peter is trying so hard to fight it...awesome. Can't wait for the re-appearance of Future Peter.

He kept on being Nathan’s buttmonkey Okay, that part made me laugh. ^_^

[sinverguenza]

haha, so glad you liked it.

[runawaycherie]

aww what a beautiful, thoughtful gift.

great chap. =)

[sinverguenza]

i love to write peter giving claire gifts. i think i do it in every paire fic. lol.

[ladycat713]

She's definitely getting closer and closer to Future Peter's return.

Great update.

[sinverguenza]

thanks, glad you liked it.

[moonlitpines]

I am still loving the twist you're giving to show canon, here.

You made me cackle in two places when I least expected it. When Claire thought of Peter as Nathan's buttmonkey and when Nathan swooped down and with one heroic moment almost made up for 16 years of douchebaggery. I am still laughing my ass off thinking back on those quotes.

Fantastic read, as always!

[sinverguenza]

thank you! im pleased you liked this chap. and yeah, glad you liked those lines :)

[quadrophenia718]

I'll leave a more thorough review tomorrow, but I just wanted to pipe in and say that your use of "douchebaggery" pretty much made my week. It's my favorite word, and every time it sneaks in to conversation, my day is just a little bit brighter.

More thoughts on this chapter tomorrow!

[sinverguenza]

icon love! and i cant wait to hear your thoughts!