119. FANFIC: "Damage Control"
Title: Damage Control
Fandom: EXO
Pairing/Characters: kaixing / kailay; OT6-K plus Luhan and Lay
Genre: Humor and a bit of mushy romance
Rating: PG-13 for some slight swearing and mentions of sexy timez
Words: ~5000
Summary: The K members have a sleepover in their living room for a little group powwow so that Joonmyun can deal with his leader complex; ( Read more... )
Fandom: EXO
Pairing/Characters: kaixing / kailay; OT6-K plus Luhan and Lay
Genre: Humor and a bit of mushy romance
Rating: PG-13 for some slight swearing and mentions of sexy timez
Words: ~5000
Summary: The K members have a sleepover in their living room for a little group powwow so that Joonmyun can deal with his leader complex; ( Read more... )
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yixing is a little demon child tho HAHA i loved it so much!
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Also, sob, you've read and commented on every kaixing fic of mine, thank you so much!!!
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Thanks for reading and commenting! :D
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HE IS THE PERFECT DIVABRATBITCHYSASSY MAKNAE EVER. FAVORITE PERFECT BRATTY WHINY SEHUN EVER. JUST PERFECT. EXACTLY HOW I LIKE SEHUN!
that being said, I fucking looooooove the way you wrote all the characters here!!! LayLu dynamics was adorable. BaekChanDO was sooo cute laksjdlsak omg. fighting then ganging up against Kai. Grandpa Suho is eternally an old gramps xD AND KAI IS JUST SO ADORABLE AND JEALOUS AND LOVESICK ASKDLSA OH GOD.
...so wait. just to be clear, Luhan did not send the messages and Lay was just trolling Kai? XD
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Yes, that's right. Luhan did not send the text messages. Each 'section/scene' in the story (switching between K in Seoul and Luhan/Lay in Beijing) do not necessarily happen in chronological order. Thus, when Kai receives the first text message from Lay's phone ("Go away. I'm busy."), it's actually sent right after the scene where Lay gets out of the shower and Luhan goes to take his shower. Lay says the text messages were all from Luhan while he was in the shower but it was actually Lay who sent the text messages (while Luhan was in the shower, so Luhan couldn't possibly have sent them).
And if you really want to get into the details, Lay enlisted Baekhyun's help to provoke Kai and to catch the whole thing on camera. (Which is why Lay says: "...remind me to ask Baekhyun for the video from the camera I asked him to plant beforehand."Does that make sense? I should have tried to make it clearer since you're not the only one who got confused OTL ( ... )
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and all your KaiLay fics are perfection, too. /creys because the world has so little of KaiLay xD
anyway! cause i noticed that the time Luhan checked the phone was 12:15 and then the first message Lay sent was at 12:20, so I was thinking, in those 5 minutes, the scene where Lay came out from the bathroom had already occurred.
I don't quote get the Baekhyun part, tho. So Baekhyun knew Kai was texting Lay? And only Suho did not know of the Kai and Lay's r/s? xD
asdjaslk jealous-possessive Kai is too adorable. So Yixing is his boyfriend? okay. this universe of Exo is perfect.
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/cries because that is definitely not true ;___;
in those 5 minutes, the scene where Lay came out from the bathroom had already occurred
yup, exactly!! (Readers who pick up on the small details make me happy \o/)
Basically, Lay told Baekhyun ahead of time that he would be trolling Kai (ie, telling Kai that he's with Luhan when he isn't). So, before the sleepover, Baekhyun hid a secret camera in the living room to catch Kai's panic attack on video so that Lay can see it in full glory haha.
But that's too simple; Lay wanted to make Kai really flip out (because Kai's cute when he's mad lol). This is why you see Baekhyun being the main instigator and getting Kai's phone/bringing up the topic of intragroup relationships/etc so that eeeeeeverybody in K learns that Lay is 'cheating' on him with Luhan. So, yes, Baekhyun knew Kai was texting Lay ( ... )
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but, oh, bitchy Sehun, whining about sleeping bags, his hyungs, his hyungs' silliness, some weird feelings circle, Jongin, Jongin's idiocy and so many things, and it's perfect, it works just beautifully, oh, Sehunnie~ <333
and, woah, Jongin's evil hyungs~ evil, teasing, having fun at his expense~ plus very confused Joonmyun, lmao~ <3 I love how confused Suho was, with all that was going on, like, what Yixing? What Minseok and Luhan? What is going on?, lololol~ <3
and I really adore how you made us believe that it's Luhan who's texting Jongin all those ridiculous things. But I have noticed Jongin sending a text at 12:19, and then Luhan looking at the clock and it being 12:15. It made me pause for a moment. So, yeah, it's amazing~ <3
and especially the end, woah~ "Jongin used to like me", lol~ poor Luhannie~ <3 but, somehow, Yixing being evil is quite believable ( ... )
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I know, he's not a cruel person at all, and in your fic he also isn't, well, but it just seems that way a little. Yeah, he's just teasing and trolling and stuff, but still, it makes Kai feel upset for those few moments and my, um, motherly feels (???) turn on~ D: but, yeah, I understand, it's just, uh~ ^^''''
lol, so either way, someone's screwed. It's just either Luhan or Lay and Baekhyun? (though, Baekhyunnie would be kind of more screwed, probably?) ^_^
and as much as Luhannie here can try to do a little of that damage control, I have to be mean and say that Duizhang isn't really good at the 'damage control' in the interviews. Like, what damage control? "I don't sleep 10 hours" or glaring at Lay and then saying something himself don't really work, it seems, lol~ <3 There have been so many things said and we all believe in what Lay said~ <3
yeah, that clears the little bit that wasn't clear~ thank you~ ^^
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Ah, well, there are some situations where Kris does save the day (like when it becomes awkwardly silent in interviews lol) so I wouldn't say Kris isn't good at damage control. After all, he's a really good leader!
Haha, no problem!
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