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foolish people; 1/2

Jan 01, 2013 14:31

foolish people (1/2)
kyuhae, broken!kyumin
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6,580 words
It's been over a year, but Kyuhyun is still haunted by the ghosts of his past relationship.

( Kyuhyun has a lot of things coiling within that needs to be let out. There are things he’s done and things he hasn’t. Memories of people he wishes he could forget, but is facing everyday; subtle touches, rushed kisses, dark secrets whispered into flushed ears. It whirls inside him like a constant nausea, a flip of the stomach. He knows only broken images, and the darkness gives no shelter; he finds no relief. )

foolish people, super junior, kyumin, fic, kyuhae

Comments 17

unfollower January 1 2013, 16:07:41 UTC

spot for maybra!

maitokki January 12 2013, 17:02:28 UTC

Wow I am a horrible friend for reading it sooooo late OTL but I really loved this I regret not reading it sooner omg I never know how to comment on these OTL but ahhhhhhh I feel like a horrible person for liking Kyuhyuns character so much ;; ugh idk you did a really nice job with his character *-* this was amazing *o*

unfollower January 12 2013, 18:44:05 UTC

at least you read it! so you're forgiven lol, don't worry. haha omg don't feel horrible for liking Kyuhyun! I mean, what is there not to like? except his tendency to fuck things up for people around him and then turning a blind eye to people's problems because he's so stuck up in his own? kidding, I really feel sorry for him tbh. why do you feel bad though?

and awwh I'm glad you liked it ;; it makes me really happy!

maitokki January 13 2013, 06:19:09 UTC

FOR EXACTLY THOSE SAME EXACT REASONS YOU STATED ahahaha and because he's such a cold hearted jerk but ugh idk I fell in love with his character, and with Donghae's as well ;; (Poor Sungmin, poor bb went crazy with blind love) haha but you should write mooaarrr *o* There needs to be more good SJ fics in this fandom \o/

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unfollower January 5 2013, 17:33:05 UTC

spot for lexy!

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unfollower January 13 2013, 16:26:46 UTC

I'm crying for reals I even filmed it if you don't believe me but it's 1,5 minute with silent sniffing and tears and ugly face so I won't force you to watch it me. the way you described Sungmin, Donghae and Kyuhyun . . . you did it better than I ever could.

I hated Sungmin because he was stubborn. He's been burnt by a flame and instead of nursing himself, he wants to turn into ashes. this was so spot on that I don't even know what the fuck to do with myself.

Everything seemed surreal and almost macabre, every sentence full of suspense and I think I'm overreacting a bit but Sungmin, Kyuhyun and Donghae felt deranged. Crazy. this too. I mean, in this fic, everyone has gone completely nuts. lmao I'm not kidding! it's like, Sungmin you have described perfectly well and thus more or less explained his insanity too ( ... )

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kyuloveshae January 6 2013, 02:45:34 UTC

I can't download the pdf, passwords is needed. May i know the password please?

unfollower January 6 2013, 12:37:58 UTC

oh, yes, sorry! you need to highlight to view but i forgot to mention that. the password is 8823 :3

kyuloveshae January 6 2013, 13:15:39 UTC

Thanks. I've been waiting since morning. You almost killed me because i'm dying for the story. Lol.

unfollower January 6 2013, 13:23:04 UTC

;~~~; i'm sorry! i was asleep so i didn't see it until now. and thank you for wanting to read it~ i hope you will like it :3

yuue04 January 8 2013, 21:05:48 UTC

I LOVE DONGHAE HERE ;A; AM I THE ONLY ONE WHO DID OTL
I STILL DON'T QUIT GET IT WHY KYUMIN BROKE UP IN THE FIRST PLACE
WAS IT BECAUSE IT HAD ALWAYS BE HAE FOR KYU???

EITHER WAY, THIS IS PRECIOUS KYUHAE
HAE BETTER START TAKING GOOD CARE OF KYU KEKEKE
THANK YOU FOR THIS!

unfollower January 8 2013, 23:31:45 UTC

I can't say for sure, since I haven't received many comments yet (see: you're the first! yay! /o/). but I think so far you're the only one /giggles/ the reason for their breakup is a mystery hihi.

thank you so much for reading!