if you look at your reflection, is that all you want to be?

[uninformed]

pre-rant, feel free to skip

little known fact about the Mina: she hates writing in the third person. In fact, she finds it ridiculously difficult, for some reason or another. One has to think of things to call people all the time, because suddenly "he" and "she" get really confusing because there's more than one person to refer to

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[akayalovesyaoi]

<<3

[akayalovesyaoi]

it was supossed to be :heart: ;D

[uninformed]

s'all good ^_^ Thank you!

[uninformed]

I'm of the firm belief that the third person needs to be shot. And then run over. By a Mac Truck.

I'm glad you liked it - I was worried the transition was too random ^_^;;

[nikki_aino]

Ah, that was great! The transition from real baaad, to quite romantic, I liked it a lot. *nod*
Great job on writing in 3rd person, I couldn't do it to save my life XD

[uninformed]

thank you! I had the worst time trying to convince it to change over nicely ^_^;; I'm glad you liked it :D

[uninformed]

yay! Thank you, I'm glad you liked it (I enjoy being morbid :D)

[chibineko]

Oh, the sentence fragments! Why, my Minanin? Why?

Otherwise, I'm in love, as usual. I think this whole grammar thing is just going to have to be a point of contention between us. At least you spell properly. =^_^=

*loves her ninja*

. . . *wants to dress James as Fai*

[uninformed]

I like the sentence fragments. It sounds better with them. :P And at least I can spell.

*is trying to imagine James as Fai and it's destroying her feeble, feeble brain*

and love to you too.