I've been shaking from making an awful decision, I've been running and running...

May 07, 2006 21:17

Well, of my WIP list, I have finished two... and by finished I mean decided that it's good enough for now. But then, I never like anything I write. We've come to this conclusion by now, haven't we? The first fic was a lot longer. Like, in parts, a lot longer. But I decided that, for the most part, it wasn't salvageable ^_^;; The second I've barely ( Read more... )

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von_questenberg May 8 2006, 01:53:43 UTC
Ooh. The first one is very dramatic but not overly so- a perfect pitch. Very good job.

The second one is absolutely dripping with wonderful UST. ^_^ Heehee. Leaves the rest up to my imagination. Very good job with both of them.

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uninformed May 8 2006, 02:51:14 UTC
whee, thank you! I'm glad you liked them :D

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marlyn_igloo May 8 2006, 03:25:39 UTC
Those were very good! ^__^ like them a lot, specially the second one.

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uninformed May 8 2006, 15:37:40 UTC
thank you! :D I'm glad you liked them.

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ekas May 8 2006, 14:08:05 UTC
Hmmmm......

This made my day after a psych exam.

The first one: Poor Fai, poor Kurogane.... stupid wall.

The second one: I love how it's so open-ended and the reader is left to decide what happens next.

Both of them are short yet potent. You really seemed to capture the interations between the two with both pieces.

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uninformed May 8 2006, 15:39:14 UTC
Yay making your day :D Hope the exam went well ^_^

Invisible walls are the worst kind :(

I'm glad you liked them :D

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The Second anonymous May 12 2006, 01:19:07 UTC

OOooOo! hehe I like!

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Re: The Second uninformed May 13 2006, 02:12:47 UTC
thank you ^_^

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