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unique_gleek

fic: The First Second Time (Part 3/3)

Feb 23, 2012 18:54

TITLE: The First Second Time (Part 3/3)
AUTHOR: Brio
SPOILERS: S03E05 (Canon really isn't my thing though)
RATING: NC-17
SUMMARY: After her first time fails to live up to her expectations, Rachel proposes an experiment.
WORDS: 7,897
PAIRINGS/CHARACTERS: Rachel/Quinn

Part 1 || Part 2

( Why am I still talking? )

faberry, smut?, fic

Comments 13

charlienalice February 23 2012, 23:32:07 UTC

That is a wonderful idea for a continuation series, don't you think? ;)
Anyway, I loved this. So much so that I read this after taking a shower and I didn't even change, and now I'm late! Wonderful story :)

unique_gleek February 23 2012, 23:39:53 UTC

But I have so many other things to write :P

Thanks for the comment and sorry that you're late :P

measuresinlove February 24 2012, 00:43:04 UTC

:) excellent story! Thanks for sharing

unique_gleek February 24 2012, 21:15:37 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!

warriordebs February 24 2012, 09:53:55 UTC

Wow, erm I mean wow!!!......... Looks that I'm struck with the same affliction as Quinn, see what your writing does to me lol. This was a brilliant mini series from start to finish, I love how you made them work for their relationship & it didn't just all happen so easily, not being sure how the other felt even after what they had shared was very realistic!! Rachel's dads were awesome & I loved BF Kurt, Hummelberry friendship just makes me smile!!
Great work as always, thanks for sharing!!!!

unique_gleek February 24 2012, 21:28:26 UTC

Hooray for wows :P I'm glad you liked it. Hummelberry is my favourite friendship to write, I think. Well, that or the Quinn/Mike friendship I'm writing in another fic.

Thanks for reading, as always. Your comments are always appreciated!

mjacton February 24 2012, 20:14:13 UTC

Can you honestly imagine a scenario in which you said no?--I love how confident Rachel is here.

I loved Rachel speech about what she knows about Quinn. It showed that she was not at all unsure of wanting to Quinn but she was waiting for Quinn to give her a definite indication that they were on the same page.

Also nice ending. Somehow, I think the wooing is a formality.

unique_gleek February 24 2012, 21:44:39 UTC

I was a little bit worried by how confident I ended up making Rachel, so yay that it worked :P

Thanks for commenting :)

mixtape218 February 24 2012, 20:52:15 UTC

:DDD so glad it worked out

unique_gleek February 24 2012, 21:47:20 UTC

Me too :D Thanks for commenting!