Comments | uniquelyuntitld: Read if you dare.

uniquelyuntitld

Read if you dare.

Feb 21, 2004 19:07

This is not about me by the way. Granted some of my views are expressed in it. Otherwise I think it's good but I always think my ideas are good. Still don't have a plot. Just an opening scene.

( Opening scene to a film I may or may not work on. )

Comments 3

melonblossom February 22 2004, 04:50:59 UTC

Thought-provoking. I'm intrigued to see where you go with this. It seems like quite a bit of dialogue compared with visual stuff; you may need more to balance it out.

andibroke_up February 22 2004, 06:57:12 UTC

nick i like it a lot. keep working on it. you should let this girl named rachel neveu be a part of it.

a few comments from a boy named D. Manc anonymous February 22 2004, 09:15:02 UTC

Not bad. I would also like to see where you go with it. It could be really good, or it could suck, but don't worry Nick, either way I'll tell you what I think. One thing though...for example, with Israel/Palestine... what you are saying is that people should roll over and die when they are kicked. I can understand "roll with the punches" when life is just life, and nothing can be done about it, but to say that a society should not hold it's ground when it is oppressed and persecuted is ridiculous. Instead of saying "Palestine, well, we're sorry about all this business, but you know, move on man, just let it go," why don't we say "Israel, what the FUCK are you doing?" Roll with the punches? Yes, but not when those punches don't need to be dealt at all.