you who i can't touch (who i can't pull into my arms) [2/2 Final]

Aug 21, 2014 17:23

❇ Title: you who i can’t touch (who i can’t pull into my arms) [2/2 Final] for parkbyun
❇ Pairing: Tao/Sehun, mentions of Baekhyun/Kai and Sehun/Krystal
❇ Rating: NC-17
❇ Length: 13,707 words
❇ Warnings: little bit of angst
❇ Author’s note: i am like ??? eighty percent sure that when you gave me this prompt, this was not at all what you were expecting. ( Read more... )

pairing: kai/baekhyun, baekhyun, day 10, krystal, kai, pairing: sehun/krystal, tao, final, fic, sehun, pairing: tao/sehun

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parkbyun August 22 2014, 12:57:23 UTC
SPOT OMGOMGOMG ;w;;
been waiting for this to shows up for days and OMG TAOHUN YOU USED THIS ONE YESSS


P.S. will be back later, gonna read first!

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parkbyun August 22 2014, 13:34:50 UTC
TO ANSWER YOUR QUESTION--yes this isn't what i expected at all but GDI this is so good I'm....???!!????!!?????!!!111?
/breathes/
First of all, Sehun is a motherfucking prince and Tao is a motherfucking King. And they're so motherfucking perfect here in the story YOU BROKE MY HEART!!! I was actually thinking about BDSM couple (lol) when I wrote the prompt but you made it into something brilliant YOU----!!!!
From the moment Sehun met Zitao on his birthday party I'm screaming just because and the slight Baekhyun/Kai made me cry out in happiness as well JUST BECAUSE. I'M SO--- /tears/
This is perfect, like, DAMN. I love this so much you don't know???!!??????

Sighs.

“Prince Sehun does belong to the people,” and then at his pout she’d grin, eyes twinkling like she was telling a secret, “But Oh Sehun belongs to no one but himself.”
Oh Sehun belongs to me

“He is. Handsome, too.” Baekhyun purrs and Sehun almost wants to roll his eyes at the way Jongin wilts like a neglected plant next to him, “And rather powerful as well, I’ve heard.”
LOL ( ... )

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parkbyun August 22 2014, 14:02:40 UTC
WHAT LITTLE ANGST DID YOU MEAN???????
Second part hurts SO BAD????
WHAT LITTLE ANGST
LITTLE
ANGST
WHAT
LITTLE BIT OF ANGST YOU SAID???!!!!!!!!??????!!!!
YOU HURT ME WITH THIS PART?????
/crying like there's no tomorrow/
Sighs. Okay.
it's good, yeah, it hurts, yeah, i just-- D:
i'm sad
you make me sad
:(
Ugh. I hate this feeling. But okay, so, this is still perfect in my opinion I'm just a baby when it comes to angst bcs my heart is fragile and DAMN THE PAIN IS REAL bcs I was hoping they would somehow ended up together but did not but I'm glad you didn't make them end together bcs that would be boring so yeah fine.

Sighs.

“Prince Sehun,” Zitao smiles a little, but it is a sad one. He opens his mouth to say something more, but by the time Sehun is close, he seems to reconsider, casting his eyes down to Sehun’s hands instead. He cocks his head to the side, “You still wear my bracelet ( ... )

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parkbyun August 22 2014, 14:05:01 UTC
But seriously, mystery author, thank you so much. This is brilliant and I'm loving this. You should have seen me reading this because I just couldn't contain my feelings and went on around screaming squealing wailing in my room.

Thank you so much. Vielen Dank.

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cehune September 1 2014, 11:05:58 UTC
I really really liked this! how you portrayed sehun as someone who's only seen as pretty and thus being underestimated kinda like in rl tbh
and omg Tao calling Sehun lovely all the time which is so true because sehun is so incredibly lovely??? Tao is also so perfect here I'm swooning

I certainly did not expect to cry since the warnings only stated a little bit of angst but maybe I'm just extremely sensitive haha

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hipployta September 2 2014, 10:13:37 UTC
I'm horribly sad but I shouldn't be because I should have expected it because that was/is the reality of royalty

Still sad

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lollipopwishes January 7 2015, 05:57:15 UTC
I'm not sure I can even find words right now to express how much I loved and enjoyed this fic. There were so many excellent details and... slow build romances are a weakness of mine... and I found it to be so wonderfully written. I got caught up in their emotions; the heartbreak and the longing and the... ah... just... ugh... SO MANY FEELS. Thank you writer, whoever you are, for writing this.

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