show me, show me

Aug 21, 2014 23:53

❇ Title: show me, show me + for read0write
❇ Pairing: chen/lay
❇ Rating: soft R
❇ Length: ~4,300 words
❇ Warnings: language + sexual themes + this is a stripper au with no actual, explicit smut, which may be considered offensive in some circles and just plain nonsensical in the rest
❇ Author note: hello read0write! i had a little trouble with these ( Read more... )

chen, pairing: chen/lay, day 10, fic, lay

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read0write August 22 2014, 06:43:59 UTC
my spot :P

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read0write August 22 2014, 10:42:09 UTC
heeheehee oh that was good, that was good :D
heeheehee i'm okay it's soft r, that's fine with me since story went so well...
better keep progressing nice and slow with happiness
MWAHAHAHAHAHAH heeheehee yay for kisses as rewards
yixing so adorably cute and sweet and i hope jongdae learns more, learns everything and they'll be happy together :)
heeheehee i'm just doing that a lot for this because yay!
glad you picked this prompt since chenlay/xingdae a special otp of mine :)

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ergone August 23 2014, 17:23:48 UTC
ahh i'm so glad you liked it!
wanted to write porn, i really did, but i just couldn't see yixing as a one night stand sort of guy in this au. being in the industry so long, being completely desensitized to come-ons, can't trust anyone, etc.
i wanted to work in more backstory for him, but yeah, that's the basics. ;; so i'm glad you were okay with the ~softness~ !!

i really like chenlay, too. watched lots of fancams while planning this hahaha. man, they're both hard to write for me, but they're too cute, and this au was fun~

(also, i was lowkey stalking your twitter and i just wanted to make sure to a) reveal myself, and b) tell you that your prompts didn't suck!! i was stuck between two and had actually also started a really ambitious fantasy fic for the sehun-centric/darkness one, but it just wasn't going to be done before deadline, so..i ended up switching back to this one last-minute. don't worry, the lateness is my fault!)

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read0write August 23 2014, 19:58:20 UTC
lol that's fine.
i don't think yixing would be a one night stand either >.< good thinking~ if you ever get to that backstory, let me know :)

omg...i'm tempted to ask which fancams you watched while planning this XDDDDD but yes they are too cute :)

(lol that's fine o_O didn't realize anyone did that. but that's fine :) as long as it got written. i would've liked whichever one you did)

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elladen August 22 2014, 23:00:58 UTC
This is a really good read. I enjoyed it a lot. :)
Yixing and Jongdae are so cute together. ;w; and oh, kisses as rewards huehue
Thank you for writing this!

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ergone August 23 2014, 17:31:27 UTC
they're so cute irl and i was trying to work some of that cuteness in (despite the setting), so i'm glad it worked for you!

thanks for reading♥

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ergone August 23 2014, 17:33:31 UTC
thanks for reading!♥

i'm glad you liked it.. i had fun writing, and there's a lot of backstory that i didn't get the chance to work in, so who knows?~~

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baeknim August 24 2014, 01:57:27 UTC
Okay that was perfect and I like it very much yes
A different take on these two than I usually see with this pairing. You brought out sides of them that I didn't even know I was craving more of ;D

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