i love this from changmin's point of view. too many times it's the big person thoughts and changmin is left a simple smart character but this was love.
the numbers and their slippage and just...everything. <33
i'm committment phobic and anti-relationships but everytime i read your fanfics i swear i'm in love again.
I love how this is JaeMin and still you manage to include the other members, giving them all substance. It feels real, almost like life itself. It emits the feeling of hurt and 'is this really wort it' at some points. As nis chan said, that left me breathless as well. I was staring at the screen like hypnotyzed. Or however you write it. >.<
I think what I love about this so much, besides the beautiful writing, is how even if the story is romance, you manage to add wonderful detail about the other members in as well, and show how important it is that they are a whole, a real group.
The formatting kept me interested; it's very different from most fics, and that works in this context. This is really a fantastic story.
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i love this from changmin's point of view. too many times it's the big person thoughts and changmin is left a simple smart character but this was love.
the numbers and their slippage and just...everything. <33
i'm committment phobic and anti-relationships but everytime i read your fanfics i swear i'm in love again.
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As nis chan said, that left me breathless as well.
I was staring at the screen like hypnotyzed. Or however you write it. >.<
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strangely enough, i loved yoochun in this.
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The formatting kept me interested; it's very different from most fics, and that works in this context. This is really a fantastic story.
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But anyway, I really liked this, too. Especially number eight. And then numbers nine and ten, dur, but I really like number eight.
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