Comments | unlearned: tvxq: y-junction

unlearned

tvxq: y-junction

Jul 23, 2006 20:59

y-junction
yoochun/jaejoong. 1,294w.

( if he holds his palm to jaejoong's heart-- )

#1, #9, pairing: yoochun/jaejoong, #2, #4, #6, fandom: tvxq/jyj

Comments 23

ranalore July 24 2006, 01:27:10 UTC

This is gorgeous. Wow.

duntuchdakei July 24 2006, 01:27:39 UTC

ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh

that was beautiful. just gorgeous.

duntuchdakei July 24 2006, 01:28:28 UTC

not fair. my comment looks like a total take-off of the first. i swear it wasn't there before~

x_voracity July 24 2006, 01:48:15 UTC

Wow, like the two before me said - This is gorgeous.
It has this really light feeling to it and it's not overly fluffy nor overly angsty.
I liked it a lot :)

kaiweasley July 24 2006, 02:38:14 UTC

I love how there seemed to be so much uncertaintly over their feelings but it all ended well. Your choice of words, the flow of the story, the style, the characterizations, the beautiful descriptions - they were all so beautiful. ♥

Sooo saving this one.

banaka July 24 2006, 02:58:11 UTC

I love this so much. It's like it's not just a story, but a glimpse into little pieces of their lives. I love how it doesn't really run in any particular order but it all comes together anyway.