tvxq: moonlight sonata on aisle 3

[unlearned]

moonlight sonata on aisle 3
jaejoong/yoochun. 1,171w.
soundtrack.

Comments

[xx_quintessence]

ohmygod. this is so gorgeous. ;~;

He's wearing his hood up like it's going to hide things, the way his spine and shoulders feel painted on. He's thin air under all the fabric.

asdjhasdfklasjdf beautiful♥

[by_dirigible]

ldjkflajkdfl. why are you so gooooooooooooooood. ;;

(two small things -- in the first line you meant "its feet," i assume, and in the second block where you start with Jaejoong shares two of his graveyard shifts -- when he's painting his nails with Electric Eel, shouldn't he be painting at the register instead of the cashier, since he, you know. is the cashier?)

really beautiful linda, i absolutely love this one. <3 (edited because i don't know how to close my parenthesees or how to use the space bar \o/)

ps: because of you having rekindled my interest in it, i bought the first season of dead like me at target yesterday :D

[firelights]

Absolutely beautiful.

Black hair, brown eyes, 64kg, 180cm, born 6.4.1986. Under that, he was bony wrists, warmth for whoever would take it, and something like woody, smoky vanilla. Jaejoong'd looked for too long.

Woody, smoky vanilla. I adore your descriptions.

I think I'll go read it again now, and more slowly this time.

[firelights]

Hi. >.>

Sorry for my excessive lame, but I did read again, and with the music this time. You are a complete genius. The ending is so brilliant. I love the build-up, the way it doesn't seem far-fetched at all and all of it actually feels real and personal and tangible and nngn okay dead. ♥

Please write a book so I can buy it and worship it accordingly.

[sayitisso]

this is beautiful, i love the way it's written
i love everything about it!
<3

[unmyeong]

stop writing it makes me feel baddd. :|
so lovely~! ♥