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tvxq: flying low

Aug 16, 2009 19:31

flying low
yoochun/jaejoong. 5,122w.

( Yoochun meets Jaejoong over the phone, on a Monday morning when he's rushing to his eight-hour day at the record store. )

pairing: yoochun/jaejoong, #2, fandom: tvxq/jyj

Comments 35

illuminations August 16 2009, 23:40:58 UTC

SO I LOVE THIS :((((

although the part where junsu called up yoochun for a lunch date kind of killed me. :\\\

thevirginia August 17 2009, 00:55:49 UTC

this makes me really envious of your way with words. jaejoong is just so beautiful in this, and yoochun is very imperfect in that perfect way he should be. just. eeeeeep ♥ and junsu also had my heart at the beginning of (calls Yoochun while he hides in the office bathroom, crouched on top of one of the toilets and playing with the dolphin cellphone strap Yoochun gave him that he says he hates. squee, cute ;;). and 11 just had me all fuzzy and warm inside because, ahh, jae just, sneaked his way in and it's like oh hay, okay.

:)!

yeongwonhanil01 August 17 2009, 04:04:11 UTC

Oh, this was great. It's been a while since I've read a great JaeChun. thank you for satisfying my desire!

<3's to you!!

visual_aoi August 17 2009, 04:08:31 UTC

This was a really sweet AU, I really enjoyed it. I loved the atmosphere of the story, very realistic and believable. So suiting for the Jaechun couple as well. I liked the parallelism of the piano and moving forward, as well as the constant imagery of Jae's vocal problems.

Very well written~

tones August 17 2009, 05:07:50 UTC

this was all kinds of gorgeous. everything was written beautifully, as always, but 5, 7, 13, and 17 really struck me and left me breathless more often than not. ♥