tvxq/super junior: nothing better

[unlearned]

nothing better
4 seasons au, jaejoong/donghae on the side. explicit. 3,005w.
for mytigerhobbes, help_haiti.

Comments

[anonymous]

first of all, thank you so much.

i really didn't expect this! this is the first time i've ever read this pairing and honestly i was afraid of how this would go but your writing won me over, as it always does. the rhyming bit was so, so great. and cheeseburgers, oh my god.

i also love the way you wrote heechul ♥ Heechul is doing overtime at the recording studio because he's been too busy running around the city filming dramas to practice singing. No one holds it against him. Heechul works hard, they've all heard him memorizing lines into five in the fucking morning. this basically sums it up. your characterization of him is one of the subtlest i've seen, and it's exactly how i see him. and the way he watched out for donghae was heartrending. and his way of dealing out honesty.

i'm going to reread this later, because i kind of skimmed in my excitement but ♥ thanks so much. and i totally did a double take when i saw "di" until i realized you probably weren't referring to me XD;

(mytigerhobbes)

[xxkonokisekixx]

Love this so much. I can't even put it into words, alsdkfjalkdjf. And what the fuck, are you like some mind-reader, because I have been on a positive Heechul-high for the past few days. ♥♥♥ Like everyone else has said, I absolutely LOVE your portrayal of JJ and Heechul's characters. They're just so them. @_@

There's so much to say and too few words. :( ♥ I love your writing. :D

[riofrio]

Four Seasons fic!!!

Stop eating cheeseburgers in the the bathroom. At least take them out for dinner first.

I really like Heechul's way of looking after his best friend..:D and I think I'm liking the JaeHae just so I can see how Heechul will bitch on Jaejoong if he fucks up with Donghae..

and Yoochun is adorable with his cameo

incoherent comment is incoherent but do know that i really love your fic..<3

[anonymous]

"There you are," he says, smiling that white, animated smile that dentists jack off to.

it takes mad writing skills to think of lines like these

[froggy_skyttles]

;~; so your writing is so light and so dense at the same time and I kind of love it ♥

Oh, and metaphorical cheeseburger convo is so much win and my cheeks hurt from smiling at the awesome :(

and it makes my spelling fail