My candy paint leavin' stains on the turning lane...

Sep 06, 2005 19:37

#2 is named... A Brand New Brand

He draws a picture he'll never forget ( Read more... )

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jocelyntothemax September 7 2005, 00:56:35 UTC
ed youre amazing

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anonymous September 7 2005, 01:03:20 UTC
wowww. is all i've got to say.

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brwneyedgurl143 September 7 2005, 01:03:39 UTC
shit thats meee ^^^^

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benfolds5 September 7 2005, 01:07:46 UTC
I'm feelin' this one more so than the first but I'm assuming more time was put into it? Hi.

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anonymous September 7 2005, 01:25:48 UTC
i like your writing... its honest and mature which you dont find often in high school writing... keep using the subtleties and leaving the plot open for imagination because anyone can relate to your work on a different level... its a natural style that works well for you... and i love discussing your work with you because it can be intrepreted numerous ways and i love different angles... keep it up beautiful you've got something going for you
love your number one favorite critic <3

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caitlovesmaggs September 7 2005, 01:27:16 UTC
yeah this is really good edddd.

i love this. "even when he dies, we'll always remember. he did it for her. and everyday, we see her cry. she's happy, but it's more like she tries. and he dreams at exactly the same time."

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