i like your writing... its honest and mature which you dont find often in high school writing... keep using the subtleties and leaving the plot open for imagination because anyone can relate to your work on a different level... its a natural style that works well for you... and i love discussing your work with you because it can be intrepreted numerous ways and i love different angles... keep it up beautiful you've got something going for you love your number one favorite critic <3
i love this. "even when he dies, we'll always remember. he did it for her. and everyday, we see her cry. she's happy, but it's more like she tries. and he dreams at exactly the same time."
Comments 17
Reply
Reply
Reply
Reply
love your number one favorite critic <3
Reply
i love this. "even when he dies, we'll always remember. he did it for her. and everyday, we see her cry. she's happy, but it's more like she tries. and he dreams at exactly the same time."
Reply
Leave a comment