"Friction" Reprinted from 'Logovirus23' Zine, by zoshua

Jul 11, 2004 19:59

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it_seemed July 12 2004, 04:00:04 UTC
I love your imagery,
"Twitching madly my children flock to
new graves, tingling in ecstatic laughter
under hazed moonlight-"

"Cranes fly inappropriately low,
Skimming the tops of our campfires."

and the idea of a war of gravity, another amazing piece. :)

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zoshua July 26 2004, 01:17:09 UTC
Oh thank you again! The imagery came like lightning, so much better than the contrived crap I used to write. Glad it struck pleasantly :)

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