Fic: in the lights you make, Pete/omc (pre-Patrick/Pete)

[pushkin666]

Title: in the lights you make
Author: pushkin666
Pairing/Characters: Pete/omc, pre-Patrick/Pete, Patrick, Andy
Rating: R
Word count: 3714
Disclaimer: See Community Introduction Post
Warnings/enticements: BDSM, wax play - see Community Introduction Post for further information.

Summary: Pete knows that it's dangerous when he's like this;

Comments

[pushkin666]

Thank you very much for your feedback. Glad you're enjoying it. We will definitely keep this going. It's all plotted out and, we just need the time to get it all down on paper :)

[jedusaur]

Oh man, I'm rooting so hard for Pete and Patrick to get their shit together. :D

[pushkin666]

They will. Eventually. They just really need to figure out that they are completely right for each other. There will be more angst along the way and it will get worse before it gets better I'm afraid, but it does get better.

[dishonestdreams]

Last line is brilliant. And Bob will make everything better for he is awesome to the nth degree; I just know it :)

My BB love aside, this is good, hon. I like the changes; I think I could read about a million words of Pete and Andy BFF fic and I do like the Pete/Patrick dynamic you guys have pulled together for this verse; it's fascinating.

Good stuff all round :)

[pushkin666]

Thank you hun, and thank you for all your help on this. Oh Bob is really awesome in this verse, even when he does screw up with Mikey! You were definitely right on expanding the Pete and Andy conversation. It works so much better. And yes I'm a fan of their BFF fic as well.

Pete/Patrick - well the pair of them are completely screwed up and daren't take what they want. Idiots.

[dreamersdare]

Anytime :) And yes, the expanded conversation worked much, much better. Nicely done on that.

*snorts* All relationships in this verse are screwy to some degree (except possibly the Alex/Ryland one...). That's why I love it :)

[pushkin666]

I would also add Vicky-T/Nate as being a non-screwy relationship. That one and Alex/Ryland are the normal ones. Mind you, we do need to add Gabe into the mix somewhere because I feel that Gabe, even though he's cobra-sexual and happy to get it on with anybody would enjoy a little permanency with someone or two. :D

[moth2fic]

Interesting andd angsty. I'm enjoying the world - it feels quite 'real'!

[pushkin666]

Thank you for the feedback. We are definitely trying to make it seem 'real'. And yes this was one of the angstier things I've written so far, but I tried to get a lot of Pete's issues in one part, because otherwise it would just be too much for the reader, and the writer. LOL.

[darkxblackxrain]

This is one of the coolest and best written verses I've ever read. So happy ro see more

[pushkin666]

Oh that you so much. That's such a lovely comment. Glad you're enjoying the verse.