day four: "love stories from a simcard" for ninemused

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Title: Love Stories From A Simcard
Recipient: ninemused
Fandom/Pairing: AOA; Choa/Seolhyun
Rating: PG-13
Summary Phone numbers are so easy to get wrong.
Author's notes: I really hope you like this! Sorry about any mischaracterisation or anything ;;

Comments

[ninemused]

Okay, gonna do a "liveblog" comment of sorts!

-omg Choa! I'm already dying of laughter
-Youkyung is in this? Yay! I'm so happy! Also she's so matter of fact and dry humored. I love it.
-Choa being a grandma is perfect. She would keep and ancient phone until it's death

[ninemused]

Oh my god I LOVED this!!! It was so hilarious, I was laughing the whole way through. Your sense of humor is just the kind of humor I love. It sounds like the type of humor that is really shared between friends. (Special shout-out to Yuna for being seriously funny in the most understated way.)

I loved the structure of it? It's really hard to write something with only dialogue, especially text dialogue, and still give everyone a distinctive voice? You did that so well. I could easily figure out who was "talking". Going along with that, the dynamics between everyone were so well done! (You really shouldn't worry, you did an awesome job!) The plotting was great too. I was never confused about what was going on. Everything just flowed really well and was very natural.

I'm just so happy, THANK YOU SO MUCH FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART!

[staygame]

this was so cute!!! you don't see many epistolary kpop fics so it's nice to see someone mix things up, great job.

[nachtegael]

Oh wow this is hilarious!! I love sassy Choa so so so much, lol at all the screaming and eating out :"D This is perfect ♡♡

[kaiosea]

this is so funny!

[sulker]

i squealed irl, this was so cute !