Caramel Cloves and Coffee Slims (Amber/Krystal) for onew

[nakchi]

Title: Caramel Cloves and Coffee Slims
Recipient: onew
Pairing: Amber/Krystal
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Amber and Krystal meet at a failed (or is it?) blind date. They grow closer until personal problems pull them apart.

Comments

[onew]

This was so cute! I love the Amber-Krystal dynamics, how you got them together without making Amber seem so boyish. And the part where they kissed was just so intense. Loving the short yet meaningful descriptions so much, really. Thank you so much for writing this for me, secret Santa!

[phonebook]

I'm not sure what it is, but I really like the pacing here. And there are little moments, like amber pounding on the door and then resorting to begging, or thinking about how she must convert krystal to cloves, that really resonated for me.

it feels odd but wonderful to mistake one's own scent with one's lover's.
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

and their messy footwork. and their conversions. and that ending, guh. The dialogue feels really natural to me and idk, this is super cute. :>

[ladadadi]

this is really sweet. i love the way the story circles back in on itself, it gives the whole thing a polished feeling.