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unodoseskimo

Oversight

Oct 09, 2011 21:26

Title: Oversight
Pairing: Byunghun / Changhyun
Genre: Romance, smut
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Changhyun didn't mean to do it
A/N: Underaged sexual situations, obviously.

( He’s cute. Cuter than any dignified 15 year old boy has any right to be, but then again Changhyun isn't exactly imposing )

pairing: ljoe/ricky, #rating: nc-17, !fandom: teen top

Comments 15

anonymous October 10 2011, 11:00:15 UTC

ahh!!! Write some more!

countrymir October 10 2011, 12:39:02 UTC

teentop doesn't get much fic to begin with, and this otp itself has even less really. but i'm happy to see better fic for them, slowly but surely. and the way you wrote this fic was really well done.

you took their youth into play and you didn't make it as vulgar or really just TWINKS FUCKING NONSTOP as i've seen other fics do to them. you made it tasteful despite the fact that you kept shoving how young ricky was into my face and i pat you on the back for that.

ricky was just, sigh, the cutest thing ever. you made him really precious and while ljoe was creeping on everything he did like a weirdo, he still came off as sweet and just playful. can't wait for more of you work in this fandom :3

unodoseskimo October 10 2011, 21:28:10 UTC

Naturally, they have few ships/fics because there aren't enough fucked up people like me in the world to write sexually/couple-y about prepubescent boys.... \( ◕ヮ◕ )/ !

"TWINKS FUCKING NONSTOP" crying forever and ever, that is quite possibly the best thing I've ever read in a comment.

Thank you so very much for enjoying this ♥ ♥

bloodyrose2442 October 10 2011, 14:01:25 UTC

This was just so sweet and well-written albeit short~ Loved it dear ^^

Thank you for sharing~

unodoseskimo October 10 2011, 21:23:24 UTC

Mh, it was shorter than most anything I've written. It's really just a drabble gone awry. ^^; Thank you for reading and commenting, sweetie. ♥

itsme_malay October 11 2011, 23:10:31 UTC

Oh my gosh. I can't believe it gives off such a sweet innocent feel even though it's rated NC-17. I totally like it ♥
And it's well-written, too. Like... omg, let me hug you.
*totally in the mood to hug everyone*

unodoseskimo October 14 2011, 05:13:58 UTC

Thank you! <3 I enjoy hugs

roseminty October 14 2011, 04:47:38 UTC

I LOVED IT. I ADORE it when smut is mixed with squee-worthy cuteness. And it was wonderfully written. ♥

unodoseskimo October 14 2011, 05:13:13 UTC

Thank you so much darling. ♥ I'm glad you found it squee-worthy c: