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Dec 01, 2010 20:49


In the eyes of a mad man
hyukmin, pre-haemin
pg13
psychological, horror
-- prequel to Love's Driving Me Crazy Crazy Baby by peaches_n_kream

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super junior, fanfiction, hyukmin, haemin

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onespringday December 2 2010, 01:39:25 UTC
no, it was definitely creepy.

cringey and creepy, for sure. i, have the shudders.

the notes were successfully weird. especially the one about the hands. it got to me.

reminds me of seven, if you ever saw it...

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unorderedlist December 2 2010, 12:05:24 UTC
seven? "what's in the box" seven? :D :D waah~ thaaanks!
I was so worried my attempt at creepy wouldn't work hahaha!

If you haven't read it yet, this piece was inspired by this fic. She's an amazing writer so do give it a try! Her HaeMin and Lee Trio fics are honestly must reads!:D

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peaches_n_kream December 2 2010, 06:51:34 UTC
... //sends puppy-pout of doom up to user above

//SNATCHES BECAUSE OMG. MINE MINE MINE MINE MINE <333333333333333

-running commentary of my reactions as i read, aka, shameless spamming-

because Hyukjae is a little bit in love with his best friend, Hyukjae doesn't mind walking his friend to his room before going back all the way around to his.

;A; WHY IS HE SO PRECIOUS.

I love how your lips form the most beautiful of smiles.
So beautiful I want to carve them out, place them in a jar so I could kiss them forever.

CREEPY. DEFINITELY CREEPY, BUT SUCH A PRETTY SENTIMENT. //clings to it like a koala

There's too much emotion in those pictures. Like they were taken with care, with... love. A strange and sick kind of love, but love all the same.

It's the same way he sees Sungmin after all.

Except, in the not-insane way.

oh hyuk ;~; //wibbles

gah, the angsty undertone and hyuk kinda sorta empathizing with hae. huhuhu~ two sides to the same coin...

"I think it's a jar, hyung."EEEK!!! l- ( ... )

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peaches_n_kream December 2 2010, 06:56:38 UTC
(so apparently the comment was too long)
-commencing spam-

He remembers blood, remembers how it splattered against his shirt, against his face, against Hyukjae's palm. He remembers how terrified Hyukjae was, how helpless he had been. Sungmin remembers how tightly he had held onto his best friend, remembers how tightly Hyujkae had been holding on to him.

AHSJDKFHJSADHAKJSAK!!! YOU DID DDD8

chilling imagery is chilling, oh bb ;_____; it's like i'm watching it unfold in slow motion. a-and their holding onto each other... //weeps

It had been too late, in the end.

the confession and the medical attention :'((( oh hyuk.

Will you let me keep you now, hyung?

THIS. IDE. it's almost accusatory ;A; in the 'this wouldn't have happened if you'd given in' kind of way, waaah~~~ a-and 'keep' ;~;

Sungmin's too in love with the other to care but at the back of his mind he realizes that he's staring at the eyes of a mad man.in which love blinds, in every sense of the phrase. aw, refusing to see what's right in front of him! but knowing hae's mad ( ... )

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mad_nux March 5 2011, 18:46:03 UTC
this is definitely creepy and awesome. all those notes gave me goosebumps.

and waaaaaaaah hyukkie ;A;
*smacks creepy hae for breaking hyukmin* ;A;

awesome fic! :D

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unorderedlist March 6 2011, 01:06:30 UTC
Thank you!!:D I wasn't sure if the notes would give off that feeling, so I'm really glad they worked!

Hahaha! I knooow~ if only Donghae hadn't intervened, we would've gotten our HyukMin~

Again, thank you so much for reading!

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tremmy_chii March 5 2011, 20:00:59 UTC
;A; SJDKGHSAGASKLH HYUKJAE. OMG. DONGHAE. WHY. HE'S SO CREEPY AND SCARY, I THINK I LIKE IT. Not that I'd like to meet such a creep one day urghhhh *shivers*

You know, I would not have known about peaches_n_kream's fic until I saw that this was a prequel and decided to read that first of which I need to comment on too. LOL And the fact that I saw that it was psychological and horror I just had to read it. Even though I don't really read fics that are not Eunhae. XD

I would quote everything. D: And give you a keyboard smash after every sentence but that would exceed the comment limit. LOL I'M SO SAD THAT I CAN'T EXPRESS HOW I FEEL ABOUT THIS FIC. D: Cause I lack the vocabulary. XD But totally memming. *Nods* Maybe it wasn't such a good idea to watch a zombie movie and read this right after. OTL *Looks over shoulder every few minutes*

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unorderedlist March 6 2011, 01:04:26 UTC
DSFJKSDJFLKJDFKLGJDFER THANK YOU! I didn't think I'd be able to pull of creeper!Hae, so... THANK YOU!

Weee~ Yes! Her fic is amazing! That is what creepy should be like.

Aww, thank you for reading even if this wasn't EunHae. I'm really glad this was able to interest you enough to read all the way to the end even though your biases weren't there (well they were, but not really XD).

HAHAHA! Don't worry, the urge to keyboard smash is a pretty good indication~ Thank you!

omg, zombie movies?! you must be a very, very brave person. i wouldn't even dare to watch those hahahahaha *me = scaredy-cat* XD

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pakkuman March 5 2011, 20:55:03 UTC
This was perfectly creepy. You did creepy very well, you definitely didn't fail at it.

I had shivers reading it.

I almost couldn’t stop myself from cutting them off so we could keep on holding hands and never let go. Those notes...poor Sungmin :(

I also love psychological things and I really like the fact that you wrote that genre XD

I think I should read peaches_n_kream's fic as well to feed my haemin addiction. even if donghae is going to be completely crazy

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unorderedlist March 6 2011, 00:55:29 UTC
Yes, you should definitely read her fic! She's crazy good at writing Hae, Min and Hyuk! And though her Donghae is much more creepier than this one, I'm preeetty sure you'll still enjoy reading it.

Thank you so much for reading! I'm honestly happy that I was able to pull off the creepiness, no matter what it says about me hahaha! I usually don't write in the psychological/horror genre, but it was surprisingly easy to write @__@ Again, thank you so much!

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