fic: These Elegant Crimes (2/2)

Apr 10, 2008 01:59

 
Title: These Elegant Crimes
Word Count: 9,972
Rating: NC-17...ish.
Pairings: Pete/Ryan (but really, Pete/Mikey as well)
Disclaimer: I have no claim to any part of this other than my own words.
Warning:  My beta says I have to warn you guys for angst.  So...it's there.  A LOT OF ANGST, OKAY?  Yup.
Summary: After his Summer of Like ends, Pete convinces ( Read more... )

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secrethitmen April 10 2008, 16:54:25 UTC
Oh my god. This is -- so beautiful, so sad, although I probably need to not go "Oh, Mikey" "Oh, Ryan" "Oh, Pete" in the middle of class. Whatever, it's totally worth it. <3333333

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unphoenix April 10 2008, 19:33:36 UTC
Thanks.<3

They always deserve sighing comments, anytime, anywhere. Oh boys.

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myorangecrush April 10 2008, 19:14:47 UTC
I'm all conflicted. Do I feel sorry for Pete 'cos he's confused, or Ryan 'cos he's being used or Mikey 'cos he's in love with two people.

:)

G

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unphoenix April 10 2008, 19:34:25 UTC
All of them. You feel sorry for all them and all their baggage and mistakes. (*loves them all to bits*)

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myorangecrush April 10 2008, 19:35:37 UTC
*hearts them*

I needed some angst today... thanks :)

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unphoenix April 10 2008, 19:40:22 UTC
^.^ Glad I could fulfill that for you, then. Though I'm not sure if needing angst is good or not.

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cass404 April 11 2008, 07:53:53 UTC
*sniff*

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unphoenix April 11 2008, 08:11:28 UTC
Glad it evoked the right emotion.

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amandabelieves April 11 2008, 12:56:53 UTC
That was so beautiful and so painful. No one got a happy ending, it just wasn't possible. :(

Thank you for sharing!

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unphoenix April 11 2008, 21:31:45 UTC
And thank you for reading and commenting.^^

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thepouncer April 12 2008, 04:03:00 UTC
Oh, ouch. So many mistakes, and so much longing for things that could never be.

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unphoenix April 12 2008, 04:06:38 UTC
Exactly. *sighs* Those boys.

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