Comments | unrealsnow: KICK ASS SESTINA!

unrealsnow

KICK ASS SESTINA!

Sep 28, 2006 11:40

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abunaisakana September 28 2006, 16:51:23 UTC

Haha! I Love it!

unrealsnow September 29 2006, 02:13:29 UTC

thanks. i think it's funny. i'm not sure if my teacher fully appreciated the title, though. oh well, i like it.

majean September 28 2006, 18:13:58 UTC

I don't plan on writing a sestina in my life ever. Never ever. But I think the cute new boy that works at the calendar kiosk and FYE was in one of my writing classes. His name is Jon. Also, we are supposedly getting a Veronica Mars calendar in case you were interested.

youjik33 September 28 2006, 21:14:35 UTC

Heh, I really like it too. There are a couple lines that I think sound a bit awkward but unless you want me to like, print this out and make notes on it, I won't.

unrealsnow September 29 2006, 02:11:40 UTC

i'm sure there are awkward phrases. i'm not kidding when i said i wrote it in a half an hour. it may have taken 45 minutes because i ate a bagel and stared into space a lot. but still, i totally rule the sestina. maybe one day i'll see what you think if i decide this really has merit.

emerlin September 30 2006, 13:25:13 UTC

oooh I really like it too! it's fun and it has cats... :)