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[unsignificant]

I need all of your help again people. I've put together my portfolio now for the uni application. You can find it here: http://michaelvesen.de/folio/

Now, would you have any suggestions concerning the selection of the photos, and the way it is presented? Btw. it's a photojournalism course.

Thanks in advance :)

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[sun_required]

to be honest my friend, it's not up to par.
it doesn't do you justice. i can't quite put
my finger on it, but you could make it much
better.

the soccer ones, i find don't leave me with too much.

[unsignificant]

hm...

the reason why i put the soccer ones up was that it was barely the only series that i shot on one day and kinda sticks together the most.

i was thinking of adding a self-portrait series but then on the other hand i dont see the connection of self-p0rtraits and photojournalism.

so you dont have any suggestions then though?

[hey_nostradamus]

The heading bar (or whatever its called, sorry I forgot) in the Iceland series says Feminity Series.

And yeah the pictures are good, they're a good range.

[unsignificant]

fixed it. thx :)

[fixedzero]

I disagree with the first commenter - I think the soccer ones are the most important, especially considering it's photojournalism that you'll be studying.

I like it otherwise - I assume that the navigation is barebones because that's what they wanted? That's the only thing I'd really change, but I don't know how these applications usually work.

Beautiful photos, regardless.

[sundaysinspring]

okay, du willst kritik, du bekommst kritik

[sundaysinspring]

ich hatte vergessen zu schreiben das mir eine serie aus dem öffentlichen leben fehlt. ist mir zum teil zu privat die ganze mappe für photojournalismus.

[unsignificant]

sehr gut. mit so ner kritik kann ich was anfangen. vielen dank linus :)

[sundaysinspring]

ach kein ding!;)

du packst das schon! :)

[nanini]

Maybe the menu is a bit too simple..
That should work as an index and for someone visiting it for the first time it's not clear what the titles link to (it's almost ramdom; unless one knows your work, he doesn't know what he'll find in "crossed moments")

great pictures though, and nicely grouped series.

good luck!