For You I Will Chapters 11 and 12

[unspokenlonging]

 Title: For You I Will
Genre: Drama/Action/Romance
Characters: Shuuhei, Renji, Kira, Vizards, OC:Kairi 
Pairings: ShuuheixOC possibly KenseixOC (onesided...for now)
Spoilers: Pendelum Arc spoilers
Summary: For a hundred years they’ve lived in exile; hating shinigami for what they did to them. How can it be possible then to care so much about one,

Comments

Love!

[jimaine321]

Ok so I haven't read chapter 12 yet but I just wanted to say I really do like this story. So often stories with and OC don't get the loving they deserve so here, *Glomps Huggles Pounce* :D I was a little sad though when I read the part where they were going to experiment on Shuuhei. When I read your prologue I thought "Yeah! Someone with the same theory about Shuuhei as me!" But then no. Don't worry though it's kewl I can't wait to see what you have in store for them. I really like Kairi's interaction with all the other Vizard, even though she's an original character she fits in really naturally. I also love how you have taken you time with her and Shuuhei falling in love. The fact that they didn't bone each other right from the get go scores you major brownie points. It's so nice watching two characters fall in love. It also makes the whole OC thing much smoother. I'd also like to say that you write a very cute Shuuhei. He's so adorable in your story I just love him to death! Ohh! And I think it's so cute on many levels that Kensei

Re: Love!

[unspokenlonging]

Omg thank you so much for this review! I'm really glad that you're enjoying this. I should probably say though that they aren't expiramenting on Shuuhei. The flashback was shown for Kairi which I primise I will explain very soon. Again thank you so much for this, I now have much motivation to write :D

Re: Love!

[jimaine321]

Ahh sweet. You might think about re-writing that part though to make it more clear. So maybe we do have the same theory. *Glees* Looking forward to more. :)