When He Fell in Love

Nov 03, 2010 22:13



Soul Eater
Title: When He Fell in Love
Couple: Death the Kid, Maka Albarn
Rated: K
Genre: romance humor
Summary: Kid's first day at Shibusen Academy. Though he had not met her face to face the moment he saw her angelic grigori soul he was unknowingly head over heels. KidxMaka Oneshot 2nd fanfic
Warnings: none ^_^



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animeshen November 4 2010, 19:12:56 UTC
you probably mean aesthetically pleasing. Also, for the record, you probably shouldn't interrupt a story with author's notes, it's very jarring. You should put them at the beginning or the end. Other than that, it was very cute :)

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ladedanixie November 4 2010, 23:33:54 UTC
Oh terribly sorry ^_^; I'll make sure to keep that in mind.
Thanks for the tip. ^_^
And thank you.

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spicy_diamond November 5 2010, 05:28:58 UTC
Ditto on the above. Also, if you're not sure if you're spelling/phrasing something correctly Google it. You'll be amazed how well it works to help you keep yourself on track.

But yes. Very cute. Not fail at all.

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