Time travel

[inpurity]

Author: inpurity
Title: Time travel
Genre: Angst/Romance
Rating: PG13
Fandom: Frank Iero/Gerard Way
Dedication: To the ever so lovely x_missdarko_x for endless support, and for being absolutely wonderful.
Summary: Frank wishes he could change the past, but Gerard reminds him about how good the present really is.
Word Count: 1,119
Disclaimer:This is a work of fiction

Comments

[ivebeenburgled]

This makes me so sad but kind of in a good way, if you know what I mean. ♥

Question, do you ever beta?

[inpurity]

Thank you for redaing this and yes, I usually use a beta. I never post anything over 1,500 words without having someone reading it over. I used to have a wonderful beta, but she decided that I was not worthy in lieu of the fact that I mock PATD, alas...

I need to find a new one, but I am terribly fussy.
I know this could use a good scrub from a proper beta, sorry if it was sub-par.

Thank you again.

[ivebeenburgled]

No, no, no. That's not what I meant. I meant, do you ever beta for other people?

[inpurity]

*DUH*
I am such a dumbass sometime! *FACEPALM*

Sorry about the misunderstanding.
I do read over stuff for other people, mostly about style, characterization and plot development, because English is my 2nd language I am not comfortable enough to check grammar and sintax.
But I love reading over stories, it's something I enjoy very much.

[white_stripes3]

oh wow
very compilcated fic, I love the opening lines~
Mems for sure, your talent is not unnoticed!
I loved it.

[inpurity]

*blushes*

Thank you so much!
I am really happy you liked it.

[faithfulriver26]

I hate you. You write something that is so infuriating and now I can't stop pacing my room. And I love it. So really I love you. But still. This is so frustrating.I mean. . . so many what if's. And God Damnit. I don't know how to handle this in a very graceful way. urgh. just. you do a damn good job of writing human beings as human beings. You have this tendency to write a story that shows how messy human relationships can be. How sometimes loving someone isn't enough. Because of one thing or another. And just. . . there was no way it could have ended any other way in this story. And I fucking love the ending for being so real. But at the same time it makes me want to scream. Because you can't always have everything you want. And its not cool

[inpurity]

Every time you comment to my stories you make my day. I love that you put so much of yourself in your words, and I am glad that I am able to make you feel so much, it makes me feel as if I am doing something right as a writer.

Thank you so much, once more, for all your words and your passion, never stop being so involved and passionate, it makes your soul burn bright.

Love, Laila

[faithfulriver26]

You are so very welcome. And thank you for that wonderful compliment. I'm so glad you see me as so passionate, that to me is one of the best compliments I could get. And that you appreciate my comments so much. That just makes me want to continue to comment.

Besides, what's the point in writing anything unless you are going to put your honest all into it? You definitely do, which is why I react with a comment in which I'm giving my all. So thank you for sharing.

[heartsunite]

This story is so simple and complex at the same time, I love how you unfold each layer of the past as the story develops.
Your opening lines are wonderful, I could almost hear the rain myself, the scene so believable and perfectly described. Like a movie in slow-motion through my head. The dialogue was not limited but somehow felt so, which made each line so loaded.. I was hanging onto every word.
Really well done, I leave this page feeling quite inspired.

[inpurity]

Thank you so much. I am really glad you like it, and that you felt as well as read the things and feelings I narrated.
Thank you again.