Trying hard enough

Jan 25, 2009 20:50

Author: inpurity
Title: Trying hard enough
Genre: Romance
Rating: R for language
Fandom: Nate Ruess/Jesse Lacey and Frank Iero/Gerard Way (but blink and you'll miss it)
Summary:Being crazy is a give in New York City. From Woody Allen's movies, to the kids shooting up in Battery park, it's all a masked, dangerous game of what if and maybes. But sometime, ( Read more... )

trying hard enough, frank iero, fiction, nate ruess, gerard way, rater r

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x_missdarko_x January 26 2009, 20:54:20 UTC
It was clearly there. "Smiling bashfully, but happy". :D Why so perfect, baby?

Unfortunately, my otp making a guest appearance wasn't the best thing in this story. Jesse and Nate were. When talking at the party for example. Awesome scene! The words they say, the ones they don't, the way they look around the room. I loved reading that. The kitten was pretty cool as well. She was important to the story, but not in a 'omgsocute' way.
Jesse curses loudly, Jitterbug bats at his bare foot, trying to get his attention, he picks her up and she snuggles to his chest, possessive and jealous. Just like Jesse himself.
One of my favourite sentences!

Jesse/Nate, you write this pairing so well. With the frustration, the anger, the drama, but in the end always the love.
x

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inpurity January 26 2009, 21:12:54 UTC
Thank you so much, darling!
You always leave me the best comments and they make feel as if I am doing something right.

Thank you again.

Ps. When arew you leaving to Africa? I want to wreite you a parting story. Something to take with you to remember me.
Xxx

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x_missdarko_x January 27 2009, 17:54:50 UTC
You're welcome. I do love your Nate/Jesse stories. They always have a completely different vibe than your f/g fics, but I love them equally as much. The jealousy theme is just brilliant, it makes me shiver.
And you're doing a lot of stuff right!

But I still didn't get your letter! I wanna have it.

I'm leaving february 1st. But dude, you don't have to write me a story. You're making me blush! And don't worry, at all, I will always remember you. Not just for every story you ever wrote, but also for you being you.
xxx

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x_missdarko_x January 29 2009, 23:27:05 UTC
I requested Use Somebody on the radio last night, and they played the song for me. :D

love!

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