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Choices left unmade

Mar 16, 2009 22:55

Author: inpurity
Title: Choices left unmade
Genre: Angst/Romance
Rating: R for language
Fandom: Frank Iero/Gerard Way
Summary:It's a road trip across time and space. His past, his present and what the future could have been if he had said yes.
Word Count: ~1500
Dedication: To the lovely x_missdarko_x, because she is still in Africa and I miss her.
Disclaimer:This is a ( Read more... )

pg, frank iero, fiction, choices left unmade, mcr, gerard way

Comments 8

suchaprettydoll March 16 2009, 23:43:36 UTC

Oh my
Oh my
I made a delighted noise when you posted.
I always role my eyes when people say fics make them cry but this..this. This made my heart break. How do you do that?
It's incredible, so painful and full of despair and the inclusion of Mikey uggghh God,
I'm sorry for the utter ridiculousness of this comment,
wow xxx

inpurity March 17 2009, 20:19:37 UTC

Thank you so much for your comment! It was not ridiculous at all, and I am really glad you liked it.

Laila.

faithfulriver26 March 17 2009, 02:20:58 UTC

god. this was gorgeous. your imagery blows me out of the water every time. I adore it. I can't even pick my favorites, I would be copy and pasting your entire story. But they way you painted this disjointed image like a stream of consciousness as Frank drives to LA. The way things aren't really concrete at the end of the story, there is room for interpretation as to what will happen next for these two and what his future holds because I doubt if he could barely look at it before he definitely cannot look at it now. I just. . . love the little bits you give us. The way it actually sounds like thoughts, except they are the way thoughts should be, metaphoric and full of imagery. Like Bob being so like a cat, and the morphine on Mikey's lips and the lizard in Gerard's eyes. God, I think I could live off descriptions like that. Seriously. Your way of telling a story rocks my world as a writer ( ... )

faithfulriver26 March 17 2009, 02:23:29 UTC

I just have one more thing to say: God Damn it Frank why didn't you say yes? God damn it. ugh, this story, Mikey! poor Mikey and Poor Frank, looking into the eyes of his would be future. Amazing how everything can change with a simple decision. damn. damn.

inpurity March 17 2009, 20:22:11 UTC

Your words means so much to me, you have no idea.
There is a lot of myself in this story, not just my Italian's roots, not just the fact that I love those guys, but also a big chunk of my own heart.

The fact that you can see through all my words makes me feel as if my writing can do something, bring beauty, bring emotions to the reader.
THANK YOU SO MUCH.

Much Love.
<333

faithfulriver26 March 17 2009, 23:44:19 UTC

thank you so much for sharing so much of yourself with all of us. It means the story has some real meaning to it. And it shows.

your welcome *blushes* I'm glad!
<333

nightlark July 13 2009, 20:44:45 UTC

okay, I know this is several months old, but it's one of my favorites I've read in bandom (and I've been here for two years) so not reviewing this would be a crime ( ... )

inpurity September 6 2009, 14:01:54 UTC

I am so sorry for replying so late to your review, I have been meaning to do this for a long time, but I have really little words to tell you how much it meant that you saw so much into this little story of mine.

Writing is what I want to do with my life and it is something that comes from my heart and from all that lives inside of me, and your words are the biggest gift I could have asked for.

Thank you again for all your thoughts and the fact that you took so much out of my words.

Lailax