Inversions in the second of two parallel phrases.....

[untamedwithin]

Well, I haven't updated in a long while. Umm....what's new? I'm still dating William. School started. (finally) Umm.......and I wrote this poem thingy and I would like those of you who still read this to tell me what you think and maybe what I should call it

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Hmm..

[_prozac_nation_]

That poem reminds me of something..if only I could put my finger on it;)

It's good.

Hey X-Jesus kid here

[hot_hairy_beast]

Yeah back when I was really into worship leading...we rocked out to Grace like rain...we blew todd out of the water...who's this