Overlapping Lines - Another Meaning

[unworthygoddess]

“This is for you, madam. Please enjoy your meal.”

A rather large woman (blonde hair fixed to look fancy) at a restaurant was sitting happily on her seat as her order, fish fillet and vegetable soup, finally arrived. The plate was set on the table by the waitress to whom she replied, “Why, thank you. I surely will

Comments

[xxwhite_firexx]

Oh Zoro, your heart (and Sanji's) is officially broken upon hearing those words from the very adorable Luffy. Omg! Are you gonna update soon?! I'm loving this! D-cest rocks! Oh, and I love the way you display Luffy very much. Seriously. I always had a hard time when I'm writing Luffy's chapters in my story. I think your display's very accurate.

Good job! I likey~ -hugs- Update soon!

[unworthygoddess]

That's why there may be slight ZoSan in the future. Haha. xD And, no way. Are you serious? You really think I did well - with Luffy, no less? Or, is it just me, since I'm never really confident? o_o lol

No, really. Are you serious? XD;

But, thanks anyway. :'D I'm glad you liked it.

[unworthygoddess]

Nyaha~ Really? XD Thanks.

I guess you'll have to wait for the next chapter to find out. :'D XD lol

[vtm577]

This is really nice! *w* everyone is kept in character so well! And I love how you have Sanji and Zoro so involved, it really gives this some good substance! I'm anxious to see more! Keep up the wonderful work!

[unworthygoddess]

:'D Aww. Really? Thanks. I sure will work hard for this~. ;w;