Beginnings - LU:NA (4/15)

[unwritten_ideas]

Title - Beginnings - LU:NA (4/15)
Author - unwritten_ideas
Beta - write_my_dreams
Rating - eventual NC-17, this part PG-13Word Count - 4,919 (69,000ish total

Comments

[for_th3_written]

This was just so.... fucking delicate
XD

I saw two of the Osaka shows. Mmmmm....
But the third night, he sounded... just tired.

[unwritten_ideas]

I was only able to catch one Osaka show because of work. I made it to some of the later shows though, and he was far stronger at that Birthday Live.

Thank you!

[nihon_hamano]

Oh G, you're in love? Me too, with this fic =w= ~<3

Can't wait for the next part... but must endure.

[unwritten_ideas]

Awww, he's in love. That can only bring trouble...

You don't have long to wait at least!

[saurgristiel]

I love this fic. This chapter was great! (And the previous one was utterly beautiful, like so many others said. Even my mom liked it ^^). You are an amazing writer!

I did have a funny thought though, when you said he was in the middle of taking his contacts out. My brain thought it would be funny if he answered the door with one blue eye and one brown XD;; and You had to ask him to take the other out before he could seriously talk to him.

But that's just my brain (and it would have probably broken the moment).
And G realizing he's in love, with everybody breaking in again, Perfect ^^

I really look forward to the rest b^_^d

[unwritten_ideas]

Your mother read it? :-/ Hahahaha. That's awesome. I'm glad she enjoyed it (and that you did to)

One blue eye... one brown eye... Then he really would be the Japanese David Bowie.

Thank you!

[mind_cell]

Pst... pst.. can i please hide in that hotel room - i swear i won't make a noise - and watch this scene like 20 more times? Please? I promise i won't drool, either! Well, maybe just a little =P

And i must applaud for_th3_written because there's indeed no better words to describe it than "f*cking delicate".

On a serious note - I am absolutely looking forward to seeing Gackt and You in a conflict. You have shown their romantic and vulnerable sides so well, i am now eager to see how they'll behave in a more "testosterony" situation. Another thing - i am surprised that it's actually Gackt who's realised his feelings first. Based on the fact that you usually write You as the, er, active part ;), i thought he'd be the one to strive for Gackt's attention. That's a very interesting turn, and a very promising one. Argh, Saturday, come quicker!!!

And also - i hope you don't mind me pointing this out but your style and grammar are usually flawless so i couldn't help noticing that you used "bought" instead of "brought" 2 times - "for Gackt’s minivan to be

[unwritten_ideas]

There is conflict later on... of course there is. It's 15 parts long, there has to be conflict somewhere otherwise it's going to get really boring XD

It's always You who does the chasing and realises things first. I thought it'd be fun to switch it up a little. Let's see how Gackt handles it, hmm?

Ohh, neither me or my beta noticed the bought/brought thing. Oops.

[mind_cell]

I am sure there'll be conflicts, but i am also very curious to see how G and You will handle them... and how you'll handle G and You handling them, too ;)
One more day till Saturday!

[unwritten_ideas]

The whole story is already written so it will definitely continue!

Thank you for reading.