Beginnings - 君が待っているから (5/15)

[unwritten_ideas]

Title - Beginnings - 君が待っているから (5/15)
Author - unwritten_ideas
Beta - write_my_dreams
Rating - eventual NC-17, this part PG-13Word Count - 3,718 (69,000ish total

Comments

[mind_cell]

*thud*

You are evil to our boys! Did not expect this turn, frankly XD I am dying to see how they'll get through what awaits them.
And no, it did not feel rushed. They have known and trusted each other for so many years, plus G is not the kind to sit on his feelings, so it was ok IMHO.
I loved this morning scene. Very, very natural.

[unwritten_ideas]

Evil? Possibly! But, this is where the conflict comes in...

I'm glad that it's still seeming natural. I worry that the further the story goes, the less likely it is that it will remain natural. I hope I've been able to balance fiction with keeping things natural though.

Thanks for reading!

[mind_cell]

You've really got the guts to try and write this kind of conflict. Considering what Gackt will have to go through in Europe, and how much he'll need help and support of his bandmates, and how he'll be simultaneously craving and hating You's support... And the kind of hell You'll find himself in... *deep sigh* I can only hope in this respect that the NC-17ish chapter we are all waiting for will not be chapter 15 XP

[unwritten_ideas]

Is it gutsy to write this? It's not something I've seen written before (or at least, not often) so I thought I'd do something new.

The rating increases before chapter 15. Promise!

[for_th3_written]

I'm enjoying the light-heartedness of this. Although I sense a change coming XD
But a bit of light, every day is good (especially since your fics are normally so suspenseful [which is a wonderful thing]) to read.

Ahhhh, silly Gackt. Can't have the entire world on a silver platter, can we?

[unwritten_ideas]

There's still a little light heartedness to future chapters but yes, it's getting kinda serious now!

Where's the challenge in having everything handed to you? Haha.

[love_teddies]

why you why!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you obviously love gackt too.
you rejecting gackt was the last thing that came into my mind... *sobs*

[unwritten_ideas]

Yeah, sorry XD

Let's hope You changes his mind!

[tiavanilla]

I don't believe it, read it twice and I still don't believe it. WTH You-kun, maybe it would have hurt a little less if he was like "I'm not gay" ... no that wouldn't make it better... Psssshhh I don't know how to feel about this. I'll just wait for the next chapter.

[unwritten_ideas]

I think it probably is best just to wait for the next chapters!

Poor Gackt...

[nihon_hamano]

YAY EUROPE-TO-COME! And all those messy feelings... *rubs hands together while snickering* There will be some Chacha poking at the two for acting weird, right? Right? Also, thanks for the gigglesnorts I got off of this before You said no can do.

And because it's the same word as in the last chap: "You had bought him up to his suite last night."

[unwritten_ideas]

Chacha OWNS the next chapter.

I do know the difference between bought and brought. Honest.

[nihon_hamano]

OTL

And I know you do <3 *pats and gives cookies*