Beginnings - VANILLA (8/15)

[unwritten_ideas]

Title - Beginnings - VANILLA (8/15)
Author - unwritten_ideas
Beta - write_my_dreams
Rating - eventual NC-17, this part RWord Count - 4,573 (69,000ish total

Comments

[for_th3_written]

T____T Curse you~

Actually, I think you did a marvelous job of depicting the turmoil, the tension, the worry and ohh~ the fight.

I could feel, reading, both the desparate hope and also the hopelessness....

Looking forward to the next part.

[unwritten_ideas]

Hahaha, sorry for the drama.

Thanks for reading!

[mind_cell]

Argh just what are you doing to us and Gackt??!! *runs around the room clutching her head*
He's derailing right there, and you've shown so damn well how men - not yaoish excuses for men who throw tantrums and spend nights sobbing into their bandmates' shoulders - derail... And once again - a rated scene that served exactly what it had to serve: digging into his mind and emotions and creating the atmosphere.
The only thing i am not really understanding at the moment is why You is in such denial. You - i mean you :) - said he'd had homosexual experiences before, so why is he so unwilling to even consider having feelings for G this time? Or is it a part of the future plot?
Oooh this chapter was SO worth the wait, but i am starting to think twice a week is too slow for this story to be posted :)) Especially considering that next stop is Munich...

P.S. Junji's comic relief was hilarious, i can see him saying that

[unwritten_ideas]

I think Gackt is more likely to break something than break down crying. There's a place for men to show emotions in stories, but it's rarely handled right. I hate seeing them cry like babies too.

You's perspective will be explained more later. So far, it's pretty Gackt-centric and it's You that's the mystery, but it will get resolved. One way or the other.

Gackt's Twitter scares me. I wrote a scene for the assassins story where they go into a coffee shop and while there, Gackt ordered a cappuccino. The next day, Gackt tweets that the only coffee he drinks is cappuccino. I write him as an assassin. He then tweets that if he wasn't a singer... he'd be an assassin.

I'm starting to scare myself.

[mind_cell]

Great to hear that You's perspective will be explained in future chapters, because as of the moment it is indeed a big mystery. I am very intrigued as to what triggered his denial and attitude :) Aw let those dream words of his be positive ones!!

Probably you're just that tuned to his vibes =P

[love_teddies]

chacha the savior better get things right before its too late!!!! *sobs*

[unwritten_ideas]

I think someone needs to make them see sense!

Thanks for reading!

[nihon_hamano]

Yay, Chacha bonkage continues! Yes, bonkage. If it's not a word, now it is. Just... *shivers* ooooh the drama =3= *insert McDonald's ~I'm lovin' it~ here*

He had pulled his knees up to allow himself better access and he wondered what he looked like right now, lying on that cream leather sofa naked and with his legs spread as he pleasured himself in the most intimate of ways.

I happen to own a cream leather sofa....... *eyes shift slowly toward it*

[unwritten_ideas]

I'm from England, originally, and the part that I'm from did actually use the word "bonk" (and other conjugations of it). It meant either a hill... or sex. So to me, Chacha bonkage is something entirely different XD

There's no Gackt on your sofa, is there?

[nihon_hamano]

*DIES* X,DDDDDDD no waaaay~~~~~~~

And I WISH! ;____; though if he were, I think he'd be complaining about how hot it is in my apartment and how plain I've decorated it and all those 7539514682 other things XD

[onixant]

Owh! too long did not open the internet, I was left pretty much the story. huhu. early chapter romantic, but become tragic. but I like the story with emotional conflict like this. Poor Gackt, here I like your Gackt. YOU do not want to admit her own feelings, maybe if Gackt make him jealous or pretend to indifferent and ignorant, and YOU are going to turn around after it, haha. YOU Gackt actual or cruel hearted, loves playing with the emotions and feelings. I really like it, haha.
I wait for the next story.

[unwritten_ideas]

I'm glad you're still enjoying it! The next part will be up in the next few minutes too!