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Beginnings - EVER (9/15)

May 21, 2011 15:49

Title - Beginnings - EVER (9/15)
Author - unwritten_ideas
Beta - write_my_dreams
Rating - eventual NC-17, this part PG-13Word Count - 4,801 (69,000ish total ( Read more... )

character : chacha, rating : nc-17, pairing : gackt x you, story : beginnings, rating : pg-13, character : gackt, character : junji, character : chirolyn, character : you

Comments 21

runne May 23 2011, 00:11:18 UTC

...They just start it. I can wait the other part at Wednesday.
Thanks for update!

unwritten_ideas May 23 2011, 16:47:52 UTC

Thanks for reading! I hope you enjoy the next part XD

shyone05 May 23 2011, 19:20:16 UTC

A little late with this, but now that I've read it several times, I'm still confused.

The first part was very good, though I was thrown off by how coldly unemotional You was after the show.
I know You is feeling guilty. About the confession, about how he's treated Gackt since, about what he thinks are his true feelings, and how he's not emotionally truly ready to begin a reconciliation. But he comes in all forceful and over-the-top domineering in order to head off any arguments and gives Gackt a breathtakingly bright smile? Really? I can't see that smile as being anything more than conciliatory under the circumstances, and I think Gackt would have seen it that way, too. I'm sorry...going to go hide in my closet now.

unwritten_ideas May 25 2011, 15:27:28 UTC

About the smile... the smile was so bright it nearly blinded Gackt. This is the Gackt who, other than a half hearted smile on stage earlier, hasn't seen a smile from You in weeks. I imagine any smile, no matter how small or conciliatory, would be the greatest smile Gackt had ever seen considering the circumstances.

As for You being cold after the show, maybe it's just the company I keep, but I know a lot of men who when faced with a pressing emotional issue that they know they have to sort out but can't figure out how to do it, tend to remove themselves from the situation until they know how. That's what You was doing. He was, for lack of a better word, ignoring what was happening until he knew how to deal with it.

Thank you for reading XD

nicolle2020 May 24 2011, 05:21:12 UTC

I've read the whole Fic in 3 hours (since I went to eat something)
woooow....just...amazing *-* I love it···
Now...*facepalm* YOU, honey...admit it! plz~~!!!
^_^ Great job

unwritten_ideas May 25 2011, 15:27:52 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far!

onixant May 25 2011, 05:58:08 UTC

huhu I cried for Gackt. pity him. stupid YOU hard hearted not want to admit that he actually fell in love with Gackt. I'll send someone to tease Gackt, so YOU will realize the meaning of Gackt for him. ahhh .. Gaku do not give up, to prove that YOU did fall in love to you.haha .. devil mode on.

unwritten_ideas May 25 2011, 15:28:38 UTC

Hahaha, we'll see what Gackt does, if anything in the future parts.

Thanks for reading!